Visit our Website for more free resources and absolutely anything and everything latest about MBA on MBA and BeyondHi,
sherxon,
Thanks for sharing your profile.
First of all,
commendations for backing a splendid GMAT score. It’s self-explanatory of the quant-heavy job you have undertaken in your tenure! Moreover, being granted a full-ride merit scholarship for four years by UK institutions is not something we see often; thus, it clearly exhibits your academic potential. Additionally, add a tad more about your overall statistics and information about any other courses, certifications, and academic accolades to your profile, and you will be sorted on the academic front!
Coming to work experience,
38 months is very closer to the minimum benchmark for experience; hence, it would be crucial for you to
demonstrate significant influence on the company and must specifically mention instances where you embraced leadership responsibilities and guided your organization through a difficult situation. Additionally, do highlight your professional growth and career progressions and any global exposure/ experience as it’s an essential part of the overall application, looked over by the AdComs in prospective candidates!
Moreover, since you want to switch lines post-MBA; hence, you need to give strong reasons for your decision. For your reference, I suggest you go through our article on
How you can justify your career switch to pursue an MBA! It would help you portray your reasons and the Impact of your future decision on your career progression!
Your ECs seem quite generic, apart from your volunteering work during pandemic times. You need to work on your ECs to help your profile get a unique blend. I suggest adding any relevant community or volunteering work you are involved in currently or even some interesting hobbies and briefly stating them. For instance, I suggest you go through our article on
Significance of ECAs for MBA Application, to understand the importance of drafting exemplary ECAs essays!
For HBS, try to bring the following in your essays:
1. Strong academics with a high level of curiosity and success potential.
2.Experience and Impact are based on transformational learning, original insight, and the most pressing issues facing business and society.
3.The school believes that various events shape a person’s life. Showcase anything outside your work that exemplifies your passion, resiliency, and ambition if you want to stand out.
Furthermore, I suggest you go through our article on
Top HBS interview tips that you need to know, to get a better understanding about
what to expect when drafting essays about values held by HBS! Overall, you have a robust profile and a good chance of getting into HBS; however, I feel we would require more knowledge on your switch post-MBA, ECAs, and more in-depth leadership examples to compensate for the lack of experience. Hence, if you’d like, we’d be happy to get on a call with you sometime this week to discuss your possibilities in more detail and properly address your worries. We’ll be pleased to help you and make your profile stand out more. So feel free to
book a free session with us at your convenience.
Cheers!
Neha Hadke
Strategy Manager, MBA and BeyondTestimonialsEmail:
neha@mbaandbeyond.comsherxon wrote:
Hello everyone.
I hope you are doing well.
Can you please critically review my profile for HBS?
Background, nationality, and educational background:
- 25 years old, Male, Uzbek, currently working in Uzbekistan
- BSc. in Economics, First-Class Honors from UK institution (received a full-ride merit scholarship for 4 years of UG)
GMAT: 770 (Quant 50)
Work experience and leadership:
- Industry: Manufacturing, Construction materials. (largest in the country)
- Current position: Strategy Manager in Corporate Strategy department
- Work ex and progression: 38 month (Analyst: 12 months -> Senior Analyst: 15 months -> Manager: 11 months).
- I am involved in projects that range from developing corporate strategy to optimizing operations at a manufacturing level. My job is quant-heavy and involves a lot of communication with personnel at every level of the firm’s hierarchy.
- I also participated in M&A projects of the company; sold 3 subsidiaries that did not align with long-term goals of the firm.
- Multiple summer internships during UG
Community and others:
Extra's not much after UG
- Volunteered in Covid hospital (a few weeks)
- Led a green dormitory initiative (1 year)
- Leadership role in volunteer organization (2 years)
- Organized clubs and sport events during UG
Post-MBA goals:
I want to pivot to consulting and participate in larger-scale projects in a diverse set of industries. I want to learn and gain valuable experience to found my own consulting firm that works with small and medium firms.
Short-term: I want to do corporate strategy/operations consulting at MBB.
Long-term: Starting my own boutique consulting firm and taking it to global scale.
Target schools: HBS, Fuqua, UNC, Goizueta
I really appreciate your review and comments.
Thanks a lot