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let us take a look at the answer options --

Option A - Incorrect

"both accessible to the palate and psychology" -- not parallel.

Option B - Incorrect

"both to the palate and psychology of young wine drinkers" -- not parallel.
Note that "both X and Y" must have perfect parallelism between X and Y.

Option C - Correct answer

This avoids the parallelism issue in both options A and B by removing "both".

Option D - Incorrect

"innovators in marketing and in product development, Australian vineyards, which stormed the market with wines accessible" -- not a sentence.

Moreover, the focus of the sentence should be on "Australian vineyards"; "innovators in marketing and product development" is just an additional description for "Australian vineyards". This option reverses the priority.
Because of this the meaning of the sentence also changes. The sentence implies that -- "Innovators in marketing and product development [=they] did so without sacrificing the country's reputation to create vintages of high quality." This talks about all such innovators, not just Australian vineyards.

Option E - Incorrect

"both to the palate and psychology" -- not parallel.
This option, like option D, talks about all such innovators.


@CrackVerbalGMAT- Please explain how parallelism came into picture.
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In the 1990s, Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines both accessible to the palate and psychology of young wine drinkers, and they did so without sacrificing the country's reputation to create vintages of high quality.

A) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines both accessible
B) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines that were accessible both
C) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines accessible
D) innovators in marketing and in product development, Australian vineyards, which stormed the market with wines accessible
E) innovators in marketing and in product development such as Australian vineyards stormed the market with wines accessible both



Hi,

There are two issues being tested....
1) Modifier :- Here two modifiers - "In the 1990s" and "innovators in marketing..."- are modifying "Australian vineyards"...
So both these should be close to Australian vineyards...
The last two choices have Back to Back modifier, which are not preferred and give a straight meaning without it.
So Only A,B and C are left.
2) Idiom : Both X and Y - here both X and Y are supposed to be similar or parallel...
In A, accessible to the palate and psychology of young wine are not similar or parallel..
Moreover PALATE and PSYCHOLOGY are describing same word " young wine...", So BOTH is not even required..
Only C is left...
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In the 1990s, Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines both accessible to the palate and psychology of young wine drinkers, and they did so without sacrificing the country's reputation to create vintages of high quality.

A) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines both accessible
B) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines that were accessible both
C) Australian vineyards, innovators in marketing and in product development, stormed the market with wines accessible
D) innovators in marketing and in product development, Australian vineyards, which stormed the market with wines accessible
E) innovators in marketing and in product development such as Australian vineyards stormed the market with wines accessible both

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Creating a filter: In the original sentence, the word "both" is misplaced. The intended meaning is "both palate and psychology," not "both accessible and something else," so the word "both" must come after "accessible."

Applying the filter: We review the choices and find that our filter knocks out only answer choice (A). We'll have to find new points of comparison among the other choices.

Finding objective defects: we compare (B) and (C) and find them similar. In answer choice (B), could there be an objective defect in including "both?" Indeed, there is: "both... and..." is a two-part construction that must have parallel elements, but it fails to have parallel construction in (B), because "psychology" is missing the words "to the" in the remainder of the sentence, after the underlined portion. So (B) is out. In (C), meanwhile, if you discard the word "both," there is no two-part construction and the sentence is valid. So (C) looks good. Answer choice (D) actually leads to the whole thing not being a grammatical sentence with subject and predicate; "which stormed" begins one dependent clause, and "and they" later begins what is another dependent clause, since it starts with the conjunction "and," so there is no independent clause. So (D) is out. Choice (E) changes the intended meaning of the sentence by making the vineyards examples, not the point of the sentence. So (E) is out. We are down to one answer choice.

The correct answer is (C).
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