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In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

A) it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture - Double subject mistake

B) began in exerting a strong influence on popular culture - strange modifier

C) beginning that a strong influence on popular culture was exerted - wrong parallel structure

D) began to exert a strong influence on popular culture - correct answer

E) beginning that popular culture should have a strong influence exerted on it - wrong parallel structure
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In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.
Sentence Structure
Subject - Verb:
      In the early 1920s,
        a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, - Modifier
    the music business
      1) became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and
      2) began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

Issues:
    The two ICs are connected by a mere and.
    A Grammatical Structure issue

Answer choice analysis:
    A) it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture
      Grammatical Structure issue

    B) began in exerting a strong influence on popular culture
      Meaning issue: in exerting distorts the intended meaning
      B is inferior to D.

    C) beginning that a strong influence on popular culture was exerted
      Beginning what?
        Beginning that does not make any sense.
      Even if try to make beginning parallel to producing, the result is an incoherent sentence.
      Moreover, even if we assume Beginning that a modifier ---pointing---> to the time of 1920s, the two ICs are connected by a mere and.

    D) began to exert a strong influence on popular culture
      Nice and easy. D is the winner!

    E) beginning that popular culture should have a strong influence exerted on it
      Beginning what?
        Beginning that does not make any sense.
      Even if try to make beginning parallel to producing, the result is an incoherent sentence.
      Moreover, even if we assume Beginning that a modifier ---pointing---> to the time of 1920s, the two ICs are connected by a mere and.

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    generis, I was able to reach the answer OptionD in much less time.
    However, discarding OptionC and OptionE took some time, costing efficiency.
    How to proceed in such situations?
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In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

We have "and" in non-underlined part, therefore we can have to options:
1) In the early 1920s, [modifier], the music business became ...by
+ producing...
+ beginning [modifier] was exerted -(option C)
or
+ beginning [modifier] - (option E)
Both option C and E distort the intended meaning (the music business became a major sector..by beginning???)-> eliminate C & E

2) In the early 1920s, [modifier], the music business
+ became
+ began
Between A and D, A and D have the same meaning, but A has it which makes A wordier than D, so eliminate A.
Between D and B, began to is more preferable. (between " to do something" and "in doing something", the former is more preferable)

SO D is correct
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IMO correct answer is D

In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

This question is of parallel structure between the past verb forms

AND is a parallelism marker present & the 2 verb forms should be parallel.

In original sentence, the usage of "IT" is not having a proper antecedent , ("the music business" or "the entertainment industry") & the reference is not clear with the noun.

So A is out.

C & D - "beginning" is not parallel with "became" - Incorrect

The choice is now between, B & D - in B, "began in exerting " is awkward & changing the meaning.

D is the winner.
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(A) In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.
The subject "music business" is already defined; thus, the "it" should not be used. Wrong

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(B) In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and began in exerting a strong influence on popular culture.
The correct idiom is "begin to (infinitive)." For instance, he began to study. Wrong

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(C) In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and beginning that a strong influence on popular culture was exerted.
When we place the subject and the second verb in isolation we can see that it makes little sense "Music business beginning that a". Wrong

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(D) In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.
Both verb forms match past simple and refer to the same subject. The correct idiom "begin to" is used. Correct

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(E) In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and beginning that popular culture should have a strong influence exerted on it.
Hopefully, it was clear to everyone that E was not the answer. E seems to commit the same crime as choice C but is even worse. Specifically, notice the "it" at the end of the sentence - what does it refer to? The intended meaning is that music business had effect on popular culture. In E, it appears as if the popular culture had the effect on music business. That is the other way round! Wrong
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In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

(A) it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture -- pronoun it has no clear antecedent, could be entertainment industry or the music business

(B) began in exerting a strong influence on popular culture -- began in exerting... not parallel with became a major..

(C) beginning that a strong influence on popular culture was exerted -- the influence wasn't exerted in the past. was is not the right verb. Beginning is also not correct

(D) began to exert a strong influence on popular culture - CORRECT

(E) beginning that popular culture should have a strong influence exerted on it -- should have is not the correct verb

Parallelism at work.
the music business became a major sector.... and it began to exert strong... need to be parallel
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    generis, I was able to reach the answer OptionD in much less time.
    However, discarding OptionC and OptionE took some time, costing efficiency.
    How to proceed in such situations?
Xylan , are you asking whether you should have proceeded before being absolutely sure that options C and E were wrong?
Although I do not advise looking for the correct answer (ever!), you had eliminated two answers, you felt very comfortable with D, but lost precious time trying to eliminate C and E.

In cases such as this one, because you have demonstrated quite a thorough knowledge of SWE,
. . . for 5 seconds per option, try to argue that D is NOT better than these options.
If you cannot say that D is worse than C and E and
you can say that (D) is fine? . . . Mark D and move on.
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In the early 1920s, a time when new technologies were revolutionizing leisure activities, the music business became a major sector of the entertainment industry by producing millions of dollars worth of goods and it began to exert a strong influence on popular culture.

Going forward by keeping parallelism in mind,
"and" is the parallelism marker, so the music business became.......and began..... should be made parallel.

Options A,C and E are out because of incorrect parallelism. Option B is incorrect as began in exerting is awkward. Option D is correct
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Xylan , are you asking whether you should have proceeded before being absolutely sure that options C and E were wrong?
Although I do not advise looking for the correct answer (ever!), you had eliminated two answers, you felt very comfortable with D, but lost precious time trying to eliminate C and E.
Yes. At times, finding definite errors in convoluted option choices costs some precious time because sometimes the option choices are so garbled that finding deterministic errors is a tad difficult.

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In cases such as this one, because you have demonstrated quite a thorough knowledge of SWE,
. . . for 5 seconds per option, try to argue that D is NOT better than these options.
If you cannot say that D is worse than C and E and
you can say that (D) is fine? . . . Mark D and move on.
Fantastic. A neat approach.
Appreciate the assist!
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