Hi Mr Dude,
Thank you very much for your note. There's a lot to cover here, so a Free Consultation would probably be most convenient for both of us. Please feel free to email me at
greg@avantiprep.com or sign up via the link in my signature below. In the meantime, a few thoughts:
Your work experience does feel a little jumpy, and naturally mutes the degree to which you could have achieved clear promotions within a single organization. That said, it is what it is, so when you talk about your path in your applications, you'll want to explain why one led to you the next and how (despite the moves) you were on a forward trajectory. You might consider devoting a few lines to it in the "additional" space if you feel it hasn't been adequately framed via the normal levers of the application. I encourage you to avoid framing anything in a negative manner ("not a good fit," "not what they said it would be," "too many politics," etc.) and instead focus on your choices and proactive path (why the next position, not "why not" the last one).
It's good that you think the recommendations will be strong. Make sure that your recommenders know what's demanded of a good MBA recommendation (depth, introspection, specificity, etc.). Sometimes recommenders think they're doing an applicant a favor by writing overly glowing, unrealistic, and highly general recommendations. That is not the case. Titles don't really matter. You want those managers who worked with you, know you, and can describe you with the greatest depth and specificity. Only ask for other recs (CFOs, etc.) if the person truly knows you.
It's tough to fill an extracurricular hole in the final months of the year, and you risk looking you're doing it disingenuously. That said, if it's something you're passionate about, want to do, and would do anyway, by all means go for it. I'd also encourage you to think through your past with greater detail -- when folks think through their life, passions, hobbies, interests, etc., there's often more there than at first blush. Think inside of work, outside of work, personal and family-related, etc.
Your school range seems well reasoned given what you've described (probably a little reach-y at the top, but you want that in a diversified multi-school strategy). It's a little long, so continue to research the programs, speak to current students and alumni, attend events, get to know the programs, show them you're interested, and understand why they'd be a fit from both a community and career perspective. All of that will need to be super specific in your applications.
The other thing I'd add is that you'll want to bring your story to life. The FP&A to consulting to GM/President of a division narrative feels somewhat undifferentiated. You'll want unpack your story, your unique experiences and perspective, your passions and interests, what makes you you, and what (much) more specifically within this stated career narrative drives you, what you'd want to do and pursue, etc. It feels somewhat generic and flat below. Really develop that.
Thanks,
Greg