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Research indicates that infants born to mothers over the age of 40
and their families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have this particular birth defect.
(A) and their families have a history of hypospadias
(B) and a history of hypospadias runs in the family
(C) whose families have a history of hypospadias
(D) whose families have a history of hypospadias running in them
(E) with a history of hypospadias running in their family
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For SC butler Questions Click Here Experts' Global Official Explanation:Grammatical Construction + Modifiers + Pronouns + Meaning + Redundancy/AwkwardnessUnderstanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended core meaning of this sentence is that infants born to mothers over the age of 40 whose families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have the said birth defect.
• Any elements linked by a conjunction (“and” in this sentence) must be parallel.
A. This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism between the modifying phrase “born to mothers over the age of 40” and the independent clause “their families have a history of hypospadias”; please remember that any elements linked by a conjunction (“and” in this sentence) must be parallel. The fundamental reason for this lack of parallelism is that the use of the “and” is inappropriate in this context, as it alters the meaning of the sentence by incorrectly implying that the conditions of being born to mothers over the age of 40 and their families having a history of hypospadias are two independent conditions that both apply to the infants; the intended meaning is that infants born to mothers, who are over the age of 40 and whose families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have the said birth defect.
B. This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism between the modifying phrase “born to mothers over the age of 40” and the independent clause “a history of hypospadias runs in the family”; please remember that any elements linked by a conjunction (“and” in this sentence) must be parallel. The fundamental reason for this lack of parallelism is that the use of the “and” is inappropriate in this context, as it alters the meaning of the sentence by incorrectly implying that the conditions of being born to mothers over the age of 40 and hypospadias running in the family are two independent conditions that both apply to the infants; the intended meaning is that infants born to mothers, who are over the age of 40 and whose families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have the said birth defect. Further, Option B uses the needlessly wordy phrase “a history of hypospadias runs in the family”, leading to awkwardness; the use of the word “runs” is redundant, as “a history of hypospadias in the family” sufficiently conveys the intended meaning- that older family members have suffered from hypospadias.
C. Correct. This answer choice correctly modifies “mothers over the age of 40” with “whose families have a history of hypospadias”, conveying the intended meaning of the sentence- that infants born to mothers over the age of 40, whose families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have the said birth defect. Further, Option C avoids the parallelism error seen in Options A and B, as it directly modifies “mothers over the age of 40” with “whose families have a history of hypospadias” rather than using a conjunction. Additionally, Option C is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.
D. This answer choice uses the needlessly wordy phrase “families have a history of hypospadias running in them”, leading to awkwardness; the phrase “running in them” is redundant, as “families have a history of hypospadias” sufficiently conveys the intended meaning- that older family members have suffered from hypospadias.
E. Trap. This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase “running in their family”; the construction of this phrase illogically implies that all of the “mothers over 40” have a single family; the intended meaning is that infants born to mothers over the age of 40 whose respective families have a history of hypospadias are more likely than others to have the said birth defect. Further, Option E uses the needlessly wordy phrase “a history of hypospadias running in their family”, leading to awkwardness; the use of the word “running” is redundant, as “a history of hypospadias in the family” sufficiently conveys the intended meaning- that older family members have suffered from hypospadias.
C is the best answer choice.