Official Explanation
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
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The controversial restructuring plan for the county school district, if it is approved by the governor, will make there be fewer teachers in schools throughout the county.
A) if it is approved by the governor, will make there be fewer teachers
B) if the governor approves it, would result in the amount of teachers going down
C) if the governor approves it, would have the result of decreasing the number of teachers
D) if approved by the governor, would result in a reduction of the number of teachers
E) if approved by the governor, would decrease teachers
Official MAGOOSH Explanation
→ First, we’ll look at what follows the comma, the main verb for the sentence:
(A) “will make there be fewer teachers”—while this uses “fewer” correctly, this is much too casual and informal; this has no place in the formal writing of the GMAT. This choice is incorrect.
(B) “would result in the amount of teachers going down”—teachers are countable, so we need to use “number of teachers,” not “amount of teachers.”
This choice is incorrect.
(C) “would have the result of decreasing the number of teachers”—grammatically correct, but very long
(D) “would result in a reduction of the number of teachers”—grammatically correct and more elegant than (C)
(E) “would decrease teachers”— very terse, but unclear in meaning; it seems to imply that the plan will make less of teachers as human beings, somehow “decreasing” their essential humanity!
This is a sloppy and imprecise way to say what the sentence is trying to say.
This choice is incorrect.
→ We are left with (C) & (D). Both are grammatically correct.
Choice (C) is long, rambling, indirect, and excessively wordy: it combines a number of very poor rhetorical choices.
Choice (D) is clear, direct, and elegant.
We don’t need a verb between
if and
approved because an “it is” is implied.
[generis's argument: I disagree with Mike McGarry here but only about the phrasing.
The better implied phrase is "if it were." ]
Choice (D) is mistake free and is the best answer here.COMMENTS from generisColor me impressed!
Most of the analysis in this thread is outstanding.
I see dedication, curiosity, thoughtfulness, and hard work.
Very nicely done.