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I will go with E

The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house---wordy("that is" is unnessasary )and illogical(a haunted houses' reputation?)
B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted---same problem as A
C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted---(unpararrell)
D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house---fragment sentence/run on(The newspaper story accurately recounted.....,said that)
E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted---good
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The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house
B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted
C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted
D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house
E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted


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Logical predication; Grammatical construction

The given sentence consists of three disjointed pieces; the second and third each begin with that. The verb recounted appropriately takes history as its object. Note that the two that-clauses that also appear, inappropriately, to be objects of the verb recount. Furthermore, the noun history and these that-clauses are not parallel.

Note that these that-clauses work better as objects of the verb said rather than the verb recount. The correct answer option will need to better integrate the two that-clauses into the sentence as a whole. A common way in which different thoughts are made into one sentence is by use of and. Choice E succeeds in creating an integrated sentence using and to combine three different thoughts.

A. In this choice, the two that-clauses inappropriately appear to be objects of the verb recount.

B. In this choice, the two that-clauses inappropriately appear to be objects of the verb recount.

C. In this choice, the first that-clause inappropriately appears to be the object of the verb recount.

D. In this choice, the referent of the pronoun it is unclear. Furthermore, had a reputation for being a haunted house is wordy and would be better phrased had the reputation of being haunted as in choice E.

E. Correct. This choice correctly uses the that-clause as the object of the verb said and uses the appropriate, less-wordy predicate had the reputation of being haunted.

The correct answer is E.
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The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house
B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted
C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted
D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house
E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted
Both reputation for and reputation of are idiomatically correct.

https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/reputation

Choices (A), (B), and (C) all attempt to have a 3 piece list. What do we look for when we have lists? PARALLELISM. All three of these answer choices have very weird constructions.

The story recounted the history of x, that it contained y, and that it has a reputation.....

This list is not parallel. We have two "that's," and I'm not sure they make much sense anyway.

Eliminate (A), (B), and (C) for lack of parallelism

Between (D) and (E)...

(D) is grammatically incorrect for starting the second clause with "said." Further, there is no clear referent for the pronoun "it." Pronoun Error

(E) is kind of ugly in my opinion, but there is no firm error in the sentence. (E) avoids the use of pronouns. (E) is not in a list format, so there is no concern for parallelism. It's ugly, but it's our answer :/
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The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house
B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted
C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted
D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house
E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted

Reputation 'for being' haunted is bad idiom. Drop A, C, and D.

In B, I think there is no problem for the reference of 'it', as it should logically refer to the mansion, as another thing as either the newspaper or the history would contain thirteen rooms. However, the problem is the connector that'. Separating it from the main clause with a comma renders the first item inessential.

E must be the correct answer, in spite of its wordiness.
thoiugh i understand all choices have being as modifier , isnot gmat violating rule of never using being as modifier
here being modifies haunted house.
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-Of being and for being - are not modifiers. Being is a gerund in this context and acts as the objet of the prepositions and therefore acceptable.
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"Of being haunted" certainly does create a modifier--it modifies "reputation," telling us that kind of reputation the mansion had. However, the GMAT doesn't have any strict rule against "being" in a modifier. It just tends to use "being" to make redundant and/or poorly-constructed phrases.
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The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house
B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted
C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted
D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house
E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted


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Correct answer: E

A-C all create an inappropriate list ("recounted ... the history ..., that X ..., [and said] that Y").
D could be correct if "said" were changed to a modifier, e.g. "stating that ..." However, its construction makes it part of an incomplete list ("recounted ... said ... and [ ]"
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Hey @e-gmat, can you explain two things here please:

1) Use of of being and for being
2) Option E violates that that parallelism.
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Hey @e-gmat, can you explain two things here please:

1) Use of of being and for being
2) Option E violates that that parallelism.



Hello AyeeshaJ,
Sincere apologies for the late revert.

1) It is not about the phrase of being and for being. The phrases that we need to consider are reputation of and reputation for. Now, the usage of being is correct in the sentence because it has been used as a verb-ing noun word.


2) There is no parallelism violation in Choice E with the omission of that before the verb had. The subject the mansion has two verbs - contained and had. These two verbs are properly connected by the connector and. The parallelism is maintained here.


Hope this helps. :-)
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EMPOWERgmatVerbal, I don't understand how 'that' in option A acts as an object for the verb 'recount'

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EMPOWERgmatVerbal, I don't understand how 'that' in option A acts as an object for the verb 'recount'

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Thanks for the question, sakshiagarwal96. The word "that" isn't the object for the verb "recount" - it's a preposition. If we look at option A, we can see that there are 3 phrases that act as objects for the verb "recounted":

The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house.

The 3 items in orange are the "objective phrases" that give us more information about what the story "recounted." The word "that" is just part of each phrase. The reason option A is wrong is that it misuses the phrase "had a reputation for being." The rest of it was pretty much fine as is.

I hope this helps! Feel free to tag EMPOWERgmatVerbal if you have any other questions!
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Sentence Analysis



The sentence says that the newspaper story accurately recounted three things:

1. The history of the mansion
2. The fact that the mansion contained thirteen rooms
3. The fact that the mansion had a reputation for being haunted.

There are two problems with the sentence:

1. The two “that” clauses are not parallel to the noun “history”.
2. “Mansion had a reputation for being a haunted house” can be more concisely written as “mansion had a reputation for being haunted”.

Option Analysis

A. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation for being a haunted house
Incorrect. For the reasons mentioned above

B. mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted
Incorrect. Repeats the first problem of option A.

C. mansion, that the mansion contained thirteen rooms, and said that it had a reputation for being haunted
Incorrect. The sentence lacks parallelism. There are two lists in the sentence now: one containing two elements: “history of the colonial mansion” and “that the mansion contained thirteen rooms” and the other containing the two verbs “recounted” and “said”. In the first list, “history” and the “that” clause need to be joined by “and”. Besides, even if they are joined by “and”, the list will still be wrong since they are not parallel.

D. mansion, said that it contained thirteen rooms and had a reputation for being a haunted house
Incorrect. Since there is no “and” before “said”, in this option, there is a list of three verbs “recounted”, “said”, and “had”. The subject for verbs is “the newspaper story”. With the last verb “had”, the sentence means that the newspaper story had a reputation for being a haunted house. Clearly, a non-sense meaning.

E. mansion and said that the mansion contained thirteen rooms and had the reputation of being haunted

Correct. There are two lists in the sentence now:
1. The first one containing the verbs “recounted” and “said”
2. The second one containing the verbs “contained” and “had”

Please note that all options in this question contain the word ‘being’, again destroying the extremely baseless myth that options with the word “being” are incorrect.
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Doesn't option B use noun + noun modifier in the end?

The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted.

My understand was that newspaper recounted the history of the mansion and that three rooms and reputation is a part of that history. So "history" is the primary thing which includes information about rooms and reputation?

Please tell me where I am going wrong.
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GMATNinja, mikemcgarry

Doesn't option B use noun + noun modifier in the end?

The newspaper story accurately recounted the history of the colonial mansion, that it contained thirteen rooms, and that it had a reputation of being haunted.

My understand was that newspaper recounted the history of the mansion and that three rooms and reputation is a part of that history. So "history" is the primary thing which includes information about rooms and reputation?

Please tell me where I am going wrong.



Hello saman283,
Thank you for the query. :-)

Although your question is not for me, here is my explanation anyway. :-)

Let's first understand the meaning of the sentence. The sentence says that a particular newspaper story described the history of some colonial mansion. It also presented some details of the mansion. It had 13 rooms and was popular as a haunted house. So, it is very clear that detail about 13 rooms and the said reputation must connect with the mansion.

Now, let's take a look at Choice B. It does NOT contain a Noun + Noun Modifier. Please note that "mansion" is part of the phrase "the colonial mansion". In the structure, "that it contained...", "that" is NOT a noun modifier. It is a connector that is connecting the following clause with the preceding clause. This connection is ungrammatical.

Choice E through the correct structure. It correctly and clearly says that the newspaper story recounted the history of the mansion and said that the mansion contained 13 rooms and had a certain reputation.


Hope this helps. :-)
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Hey @e-gmat, can you explain two things here please:

1) Use of of being and for being
2) Option E violates that that parallelism.



Hello AyeeshaJ,
Sincere apologies for the late revert.

1) It is not about the phrase of being and for being. The phrases that we need to consider are reputation of and reputation for. Now, the usage of being is correct in the sentence because it has been used as a verb-ing noun word.


2) There is no parallelism violation in Choice E with the omission of that before the verb had. The subject the mansion has two verbs - contained and had. These two verbs are properly connected by the connector and. The parallelism is maintained here.


Hope this helps. :-)
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Can we say that the usage of ,that is wrong and eliminate the options?
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A – Reputation for being a haunted house – wrong
B- seems good . But, it cannot refer back to mansion by jumping back to first sentence
C- same reason of A- wrong
D- mentioning that is correct . Said that -wrong. Ambiguity of it
E- seems good . E is the right answer

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Yes, we can! None of the "that" phrases in A-D are parallel with the rest of the structure.
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