Hi
MBApat,
If you need help preparing for the video interview, please reach out to us at
Admissionado. We offer a la carte services, including interview prep. Since you have multiple tries to record it, we are happy to do "dry runs" with you.
We would first have you write out a script so we can see how you would talk out your key points. Then, we would have you record samples so you we can evaluate not only how you are communicating that content but also your style and general colloquialism. As you probably know, a video essay needs to be animated, more so than an in person interview.
Hope that helps!
Best,
Seth
https://admissionado.com/free-consultation/