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FuturePM91
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Concentration: Strategy, Social Entrepreneurship
Schools: HBS '20 (D) Kellogg '20 (M$) Haas '20 (D) Yale '20 (D) WP Carey" 20 (A$) McCombs '20 (A$) Tepper '20 (A) Ross '20 (A) Wharton '20 (D) Anderson '20 (WD)
GMAT 1: 740 Q48 V44
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13 Jul 2017, 18:13
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WOOHOO!
I have a question re: the tweaked essay #1....I am currently working on editing my essays down to the word limit...I've got about 200 words left to cut. I am trying to decide where to cut it from: 1. the challenges faced 2. the solutions I implemented 3. The long term impact (the new part of the question 4. Lessons learned or 5. How those lessons will carry on to my experience at Kellogg.....any opinions on which part I should cut from???
Mimster
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13 Jul 2017, 18:18
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I personally feel that 3 and 5 are important. When I was writing my applications I found ways to shrink rather than cut. How about finding shorter ways to phrase sentences so you won't have to sacrifice content?
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FuturePM91
Joined: 05 Nov 2015
Last visit: 27 Apr 2022
Posts: 542
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 71
Concentration: Strategy, Social Entrepreneurship
Schools: HBS '20 (D) Kellogg '20 (M$) Haas '20 (D) Yale '20 (D) WP Carey" 20 (A$) McCombs '20 (A$) Tepper '20 (A) Ross '20 (A) Wharton '20 (D) Anderson '20 (WD)
GMAT 1: 740 Q48 V44
Schools: HBS '20 (D) Kellogg '20 (M$) Haas '20 (D) Yale '20 (D) WP Carey" 20 (A$) McCombs '20 (A$) Tepper '20 (A) Ross '20 (A) Wharton '20 (D) Anderson '20 (WD)
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14 Jul 2017, 06:28
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Hi,
Thanks a lot for your help! I have about 72 words to go. I am definitely trying to say things more succinctly but still want to make sure that I am spending enough time on the most important aspects of the essay as well, so I appreciate your insight!
