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Project SC Butler: Day 134: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help - gives meaning that these seeds requires expensive agriculture - contrasting with main statement

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps Subject verb issue - "Seeds - help"

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps -Combination of errors in A and B

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help Correct

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help -ve without and -ve no causes issues
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IMO D.

Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help - Meaning clarity error; as mentioned 'cost effective manner' in non underlined part of the sentence, '...... or with expensive agriculture' contrasts the information, ultimately changing the intended meaning of the sentence.

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps - SVA error; GMS (plural) ,....., helps (singular)

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps - SVA error; GMS (plural) ,....., helps (singular)

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help - No error

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help - Redundancy error which alters the meaning of the sentence.
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(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help
Meaning of sentence is in issue. should be 'with no .... or expensive agriculture'

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps
Subject-Verb agreement error. Seeds.... help

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps
Parallelism issue - 'having no requirement of..... with....'. Subject-Verb agreement error - help

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help
Correct

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help
similar issue as A. 'without requirement of ..... or expensive agriculture'.

Answer should be D.
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Seeds....help is the right S-V structure as 'seeds' is plural

Eliminate (B) & (C)

(A) changes the intended meaning, giving the impression that genetically modified seeds either eliminate the need for costly fertilizers or the seeds bring the need for expensive agriculture. Illogical

-This is seen is (C) as well

Eliminate (A)

In (E), the double negation - without....no expensive agriculture changes the meaning again

Eliminate (E)

Answer is (D)
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Correct Answer is D

Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help - not with the intended meaning, seeds dont require fertilizer...

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps - SVA error, Seeds as a plural Sub. , agreement with Verb will also be Plural

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps - Same as B

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help - No Error

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help - Meaning changes by the introduction of no after OR
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main catch of the sentence is the SV error ; subject is Genetically modified seeds so plural verb help will be correct
negate B,C,E
among A & D
A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help ; usage of 'with' is wrong

D)without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help

IMO D

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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help
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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

5 seconds scan
1)helps vs help
2)with x or with y parallel

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help : meaning error we want to say seeds are less expensive so both legs should convey the same

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps :subject verb error

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps :subject verb error

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help : not parallel without and no

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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help ( awkward, doesn't make sense -- how can Genetically modified seeds with expensive agriculture-- help farmers)

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps --- seeds plural needs help not helps(singular)

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps ( having-- its continuous tense, no need here)

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help ( doesn't require the additional "NO" after or)
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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

Sentence Structure--> Subject , Modifier , Verb + Object.

Error Analysis--> There is a problem with the modifier (of) costly fertilizer is not parallel to (with) expensive agriculture and thus renders an incorrect meaning.
S-V is accounted for.
Let's look for a choice which corrects this error.
Choice D uses --> Without --> which is nothing but a better concise version of( with no).

IMHO D
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The obvious split is "helps/help". Seeds is plural, so we need to use "help".Eliminate B and C.
The intended meaning is GMS can help farmers without requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture.
Only D preserves this meaning. Hence IMO D.
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A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help
not parallel x or y should be parallel change the intended meaning

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps
subject verb error

(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps
subject-verb error

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help
without x or y is correct correct subject verb (CORRECT)

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help
double negative is wrong in the sentence
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Genetically modified seeds, with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, [align=]help[/align] farmers grow crops in a cost effective manner.

(A) with no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, help - with no ... or with ...wrong meaning

(B) with no requirements of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, helps - seeds is plural word, so it requires plural form of verb
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(C) having no requirement of costly fertilizer or with expensive agriculture, helps - seeds is plural word, so it requires plural form of verb

(D) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or expensive agriculture, help - correct answer

(E) without the requirement of costly fertilizer or no expensive agriculture, help -redundancy
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