rish2708
Hi
GMATNinja ( Charles),
Thanks for opening this forum.
I am struggling with usage of dashes in two questions I encountered in OG.
Links:
Q1)
https://gmatclub.com/forum/some-anthrop ... 34793.htmlQ2)
https://gmatclub.com/forum/although-app ... 32487.htmlNow here in Q1) we use that after the dash, however, I feel that the dash part modifies bottleneck and usage of that seems illogical.
--> Reading the answers it seems that the dash establishes a link and thus that is required to maintain parallelism.
Could you please help explain how are we saying that usage of dash requires "that"And if we say that since dash is used as a conjunction then
why do we not use dash + that in Q2 ?Waiting for the response.
Regards,
Rishav
For starters, I wouldn’t worry much about dashes. Grammar and style experts disagree about when it’s appropriate to use dashes, and I’ve seen no evidence that the GMAT is trying to test us on the “rules” for dash uses. Which is good, because there arguably aren’t any rules for dashes that are universally accepted.
In other words: the GMAT will never test you on the nuances of dash usage. So you should ALWAYS look for other decision points if you see a dash in the answer choices. (More on punctuation in general in
this video.)
We can’t really say that dashes are specifically used as conjunctions (a conjunction is a word; punctuation is not), or that the usage of a dash always requires “that.” Most of the time, dashes just set aside some sort of modifier, and modifiers can take all sorts of forms.
Here’s the original sentence for the 2nd question you mentioned:
Quote:
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year—they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises—heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
Notice that the dashes aren’t even underlined! They’re 100% irrelevant to us, since they appear in all five answer choices.
But what are the dashes doing? Well, they almost act like parentheses here. The author has a little bit more to say about heirloom tomatoes, and wants to imbed an additional clause in the middle of the sentence. But since it’s an incidental comment, it’s surrounded by dashes. Fair enough.
But again: who cares? The dashes aren’t underlined!
For the question in link #1, try ignoring the dash completely, and see if that allows you to arrive at the correct answer. I see clear errors – mostly related to meaning – in four answer choices. The fifth happens to begin with a “that” after the dash, but we don’t actually need to worry about that issue to get the question right.
And I’m not sure that the use of “that” is absolutely necessary in the correct answer. I’d be OK without it, to be honest. But you could argue that it helps the clarity a little bit, since the phrase starting with “that” is just another thing that the anthropologists believe: “Some anthropologists believe… that at some time in the past our ancestors suffered an event…”
But again, I wouldn't overthink it. There are more important decision points than the presence or absence of “that” after the dash.
Bottom line: you can basically ignore dashes, since the GMAT never really seems to test us on the correct use of dashes. Always look for other decision points first.
I hope this helps a bit!