OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONTHE PROMPTQuote:
In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.
THE optionsQuote:
A) who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.
• this option is not a complete sentence.
• strip the non-essential material and we end up with an incomplete sentence:
Wrong: In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who . . . and promptly did.
Eliminate A
Quote:
B) who declared it was permissible for a Pope to resign, which he promptly did
•
which is missing an antecedent
• logically,
which refers to Celestine's
resignation, but the noun
resignation does not appear
• the infinitive
to resign cannot act as the referent of
whichEliminate B
Quote:
C) who had declared that it could be permitted that a Pope resign and then promptly did this
•
this should be followed by a noun (or "point" to) a noun: I like
this peach ice cream recipe, but not
that recipe because it includes walnuts.
• the phrase
that it could be permitted that a Pope resign is awkward and
unnecessarily wordyEliminate C
Quote:
D) who had declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign and then promptly did so
• looks promising -
did so is
• correctly uses the past perfect (HAD + declared) to refer to the earlier of two past events
• past perfect correctly refers to a completed action (Celestine's declaration that a Pope could resign) that occurred before a second action (Celestine V's resignation)
• fixes the missing referent problem in (C) by using
did soKEEP
Quote:
E) who, having declared it permissible for a Pope to resign, then promptly doing so
• As is the case in option A, we have an incomplete sentence
• Remove the non-essential modifier and we end up with a sentence that does not make sense:
Wrong: In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who . . . then promptly doing so.
Eliminate E
The best answer is D.COMMENTSThese answers range from very good to excellent. Nicely done. Happy kudos.