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I think it's D .

In choice D .. 'Do so ' is idiomatically correct . and correctly used in the sentence in past tense . Use of had is correct as well to show the sequence of the events .

In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.

A) who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did

B) who declared it was permissible for a Pope to resign, which he promptly did

C) who had declared that it could be permitted that a Pope resign and then promptly did this

D) who had declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign and then promptly did so

E) who, having declared it permissible for a Pope to resign, then promptly doing so
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In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.


POE:
Stop sign - 'having'
The sentence is in double past, we need 'had' - Eliminate (A), (B) & (E).
(D) is way more clear and neat. Eliminate (C).

A) who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did

B) who declared it was permissible for a Pope to resign, which he promptly did

C) who had declared that it could be permitted that a Pope resign and then promptly did this

D) who had declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign and then promptly did so - CORRECT

E) who, having declared it permissible for a Pope to resign, then promptly doing so
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thIn 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.

A) who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did // a complete mess. who and promptly did? an incomplete dependent clause

B) who declared it was permissible for a Pope to resign, which he promptly did // "which" refers to a clause here. "which" can refer to only a noun. a pronoun ambiguity is here. he may refer to Pope Boniface VIII or Celestine V.

C) who had declared that it could be permitted that a Pope resign and then promptly did this // "this" is a dangling modifier. a subject and a verb disagree. i.e. A pope resign

D) who had declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign and then promptly did so // correct.

E) who, having declared it permissible for a Pope to resign, then promptly doing so // who then promptly doing so? an incomplete dependent clause.
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The official explanation is here
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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

THE PROMPT
Quote:
In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.

THE options

Quote:
A) who, having declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign, and promptly did.
• this option is not a complete sentence.
• strip the non-essential material and we end up with an incomplete sentence:
Wrong: In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who . . . and promptly did.
Eliminate A

Quote:
B) who declared it was permissible for a Pope to resign, which he promptly did
which is missing an antecedent
• logically, which refers to Celestine's resignation, but the noun resignation does not appear
• the infinitive to resign cannot act as the referent of which
Eliminate B

Quote:
C) who had declared that it could be permitted that a Pope resign and then promptly did this
this should be followed by a noun (or "point" to) a noun: I like this peach ice cream recipe, but not that recipe because it includes walnuts.
• the phrase that it could be permitted that a Pope resign is awkward and unnecessarily wordy
Eliminate C

Quote:
D) who had declared that it was permissible for a Pope to resign and then promptly did so
• looks promising - did so is
• correctly uses the past perfect (HAD + declared) to refer to the earlier of two past events
• past perfect correctly refers to a completed action (Celestine's declaration that a Pope could resign) that occurred before a second action (Celestine V's resignation)
• fixes the missing referent problem in (C) by using did so
KEEP

Quote:
E) who, having declared it permissible for a Pope to resign, then promptly doing so
• As is the case in option A, we have an incomplete sentence
• Remove the non-essential modifier and we end up with a sentence that does not make sense:
Wrong: In 1294 Boniface VIII began his papacy, replacing Celestine V, who . . . then promptly doing so.
Eliminate E

The best answer is D.



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