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First — as always — you should go to the problem statement: You need to strengthen an argument.
So, we need to...
...determine the point of the "argument";
...express the argument in a more accessible form ("explain to a 10-year-old");
...determine what a correct answer should do.
Find the point of the argument:This is straightforward, since the argument consists of only two statements — the second of which is
explicitly labeled as "
the reason for" the first.
Accordingly, the
FIRST statement must be the argument's
point (conclusion).
Simplify the argument / "Explain to a 10-year-old":"When reporters write headlines, they use stuff that
they know — but that
random readers won't know. (This stuff makes the headlines "clever" — but, most people won't KNOW that they are "clever" headlines, because they won't have the requisite knowledge!)
Therefore...
Reporters shouldn't be allowed to write headlines for their own stories."
Define a correct answer:Because of the simplicity of this argument, there really isn't much that a correct answer could do — it just has to beef up the connection between the single stated reason and the conclusion.
A CORRECT ANSWER needs to SOLIDIFY THE CONNECTION between
"MOST PEOPLE WON'T UNDERSTAND headlines written by reporters"
and
"Headlines SHOULDN'T BE WRITTEN by reporters".Use this standard to "interview" the answer choices:
Quote:
(A) The reporter who writes a story is usually better placed than the reporters' editor is to judge what the story's most newsworthy features are.
• If "
newsworthy features" are related to
HEADLINES... then this choice goes the
WRONG WAY. (In that case, this choice would give a consideration IN FAVOR OF letting reporters write headlines.)
• If "
newsworthy features" are
NOT related to
headlines... then this choice is
irrelevant.
Bad either way.
(
NO answer choice will
EVER be a toss-up between CORRECT and irrelevant!)
Quote:
(B) To write a headline that is clever, a person must have sufficient understanding of the story that the headline accompanies.
This choice is
irrelevant, because the argument already acknowledges that reporters' headlines
ARE clever.
The issue is not that the headlines AREN'T clever; the issue is that
random readers won't RECOGNIZE that they are clever.
Quote:
(C) Most reporters rarely bother to find out how other reporters have written stories and headlines about the same events that they themselves have covered.
This choice does not speak to the actual issue — i.e., that reporters tend to use obscure information in crafting headlines — and is thus
irrelevant.
Quote:
(D) For virtually any story that a reporter writes, there are at least a few people who know more about the story's subject matter than does the reporter.
This choice is almost certainly true, just by common sense. (Go to a newspaper site and click on any random article. Obviously, there will be people in the world who have dedicated their lives and careers to becoming experts on the
exact thing that is the topic of the article... these people will clearly know more about that thing than will the reporter.)
...But this choice is
irrelevant, because there is no reason to think that these world-class experts would be
available to write headlines. Therefore, we don't care whether they exist.
(Furthermore — The reporters' PROBLEM is already that they have TOO MUCH "little-known" knowledge! So, even in the incredibly farfetched scenario in which these experts
could be tapped to write headlines... THEIR headlines would have the same problem as the reporters' headlines, only even WORSE!)
Quote:
(E) The kind of headlines that newspaper editors want are those that anyone who has read a reporter's story in its entirety will recognize as clever.
If this statement is true, then the typical reporter's headline — as described — will
NOT be the kind of headline that newspaper editors want, since only readers who are privy to the "little-known information" will recognize the reporter's headline as clever.
This statement provides strong additional support for the notion that editors should
not allow reporters to write headlines for their stories.
CORRECT ANSWER