Hi
Akshit24,
Thank you for your post. Here are several thoughts:
SOLID EXPERIENCESThere is a lot to like about several elements of your profile. Your GMAT score and undergraduate institution are strong; your professional experience touches two valuable fields (analytics and consulting... valuable in terms of giving you a strong baseline skill set for an MBA and post-MBA jobs) and a third (product management) that is tied more directly to your goals; you've been promoted; and you seem to have expanded your impact (business / measurable / quantifiable impact) and learned and grown along the way.
UNPACK THE VALUE OF THOSE EXPERIENCESMuch of key to your applications will hinge on how exactly you unpack and articulate those experiences. In doing so, I'd like you to consider both the items I referenced above, as well as who you partnered with, how you collaborated, how you connected with people, when and how you ever stepped across cultural or functional lines, when and how you built relationships and helped others, when you might have stepped outside your comfort zone or even failed. I say this because your current write-up tends to feel a little more "me-centric" (I was the youngest... I received awards... I did things my by myself) than you will want to portray in any
As an aside, I'd be curious to know whether you had any international experience while working with the U.S. firm (or otherwise). Even if you didn't physically travel to international clients or the United States, working for an international firm often entails a great deal of cross-country and cross-cultural collaboration, which then opens the door for you to talk about how you bridged those gaps, connected with people, partnered, empathized, grew, stepped outside your comfort zone, etc. -- many of the items I referenced above.
MORE ON YOUR COMMUNITY LEADERSHIPI am also curious to learn more about your post-college community leadership. You seem to have been pretty active during college, and there's probably even more relevance for you there (than for other candidates) in that your college experiences with UBER and Red Bull are still highly relevant to your goals. Nevertheless, post-college leadership is more recent and valuable, and being part of a core CSR organizing team typically entails a lot of work, a lot of collaboration, a lot of idea generation and multi-party execution, and a lot of events and impact.
If that experience really is substantive, than it should be a key pillar of your application narrative. Where exactly it shows up will, of course, depend on which schools / applications you're dealing with, as the number of essays, word counts of those essays, and essay topics vary greatly. Also consider what motivated you to pursue this particular angle of leadership and involvement, and how it might inform how you believe you can uniquely contribute at each MBA program to which you apply. Either way, it's definitely worth unpacking further.
CHALLENGES AND SCHOOLSThe challenges that you're up against are among the most common for candidates applying from your applicant pool, which, as I'm sure you're aware, is the most crowded and competitive out there. According to
one GMAT Club study, Indian applicants with a 750 GMAT have around an 11% acceptance rate across the entirety of the U.S. top 20. That figure is naturally going to be even lower at M7 programs (probably more like 5%), and even lower still at smaller programs like Sloan and Haas. So even though I do think you could -- with *superb application execution* -- convert a school or two at this level, it's going to be hard. And that's okay, as a smart school strategy should test the upside of where you can get in. At the same time -- and particularly if you value "getting in" to a very good school (as opposed to only aiming very high and being okay with not getting in anywhere, dusting yourself off, and re-applying in a subsequent year) -- it would likely behoove you to include schools from the next tier or two in your strategy.
CHALLENGES AND GOALSAlso be aware that your career goals as stated above are more or less the "career goals du jour" among MBA applicants, particularly among your applicant pool, and particularly targeting companies mega-firms the ones you've listed. So I would encourage you to reflect deeply on those goals; if that truly in your heart of hearts is your post-MBA goal, that's fine, but you will have research, know, and articulate the deeper layers of those goals with tremendous specificity and nuance. Every year, tons of solid applicants are undermined by the fact that their essays make it sound like they simply pulled a common goal off of the MBA shelf and didn't put much thought or legwork into *why exactly* that's their goal, what exact companies they'd want to work for, products they'd want to manage, things they'd want to accomplish, etc. Also think more deeply about the companies; Amazon, Google, and Tesla are very different, and here again, it feels like you're just naming the biggest or most popular names. Which industries and sub-industries are you *really interested in and why*? Which products? What size or stage companies? What unique impact can you have in these positions? Why? Why? Why?
[Also note that the nature of product manager roles -- and the hiring / technical prerequisites -- vary greatly from firm to firm. No matter how you slice it, you need to talk to a lot of people, do a lot research and due diligence, and then showcase how thoughtful, nuanced, and specific your understanding and goals are within your essays and applications.]
WHY MBA? WHY XYZ SCHOOL?As you develop the specificity of your goals, you will need to again consider and articulate how exactly your previous experience -- plus the MBA -- equals, leads to, or enables your super-specific short-term goals, and then how all of that combines to equal, lead to, or enable your super-specific medium- and long-term goals. What knowledge, skills, and experience do you already have that are relevant to these goals? What knowledge, skills, and experience are you missing and therefore need to acquire via an MBA? How *exactly* will you acquire this knowledge, skill, and experience at each MBA program to which you apply? Which courses, clubs, special programs, extracurriculars, conferences, or case competitions? What about each school's culture, community, and location make it right for you? Why do you fit with that culture, what unique contributions can you make to the class, and how exactly will you make them? What is the passion and purpose behind your goals, and what are the grander challenges you're hoping to solve? For more about how to think about these topics, you can check out this blog post:
https://www.avantiprep.com/blog/the-mos ... on-process[As an aside, since we are are in the MIT Sloan forum here, the importance of super-deep goal specificity is a little muted given Sloan's application and essay structure, but it's critical -- and central to main essays -- at most other schools, including the others you've listed below.)
FREE CONSULTATIONI hope this helps both you and anyone else reading it, as a lot of the takeaways can be applied to anyone going through a similar process. If you have any questions or would like to further the conversation, anyone can feel free to email me at
greg@avantiprep.com or sign up for a Free Consultation via this link:
https://www.avantiprep.com/free-consultation.html. Best of luck to everyone, and I hope we have the opportunity to chat!
Best Regards,
Greg
Akshit24
Hi Experts,
I'd request you to give feedback on my profile.
Male, 26, Indian
Education
GMAT 750 (Q50 V41 IR7 AWA5)
Undergrad: Netaji Subhas Institute of Technology (N.S.I.T.) in Manufacturing Process and Automation Engineering (7.6 GPA)
12th: 79%
10th: 91%
Work Exp : 3 years currently
Started my career in 2016 with strongly growing US based Analytics and Consulting firm, worked as an Associate for 2.5 years in a variety of different projects in Analytics and Consulting. Awarded twice for best performance in a quarter and a best team award for best team in a year. Learned skills of data analytics and machine learning. Handled client calls regularly by myself. Instrumental in winning bids worth $2M for the firm. Got promoted once in first year. I was also the youngest trainer in the company for teaching new joiners (received best trainer rating, got recognition at company level)
Wanted a job where i could leverage the analytics skills with execution skills acquired in college (by working in Uber and Red Bull) and my keen interest in technology. Hence moved to Product Manager profile in one of the largest OTA (Online Travel Aggregator) in India. Have been working there for last 7 months.
Extra Curricular
Worked for Red Bull in my college days for 2.5 years as a Student Brand Manager (SBM). I learned consumer behavior, ground level sales and operations. Awarded best SBM for 3 consecutive quarters
Helped setup a similar Student Brand Manager program for UBER India. Helped set up a team of 50 Students in different college across Delhi
Head of Event Management in largest annual technical fest of my college
Did a startup for 6 months in college, couldn't take off though
Played badminton since school, played state level.
Played badminton in college and won multiple tournaments in college and one in Axtria
Social Work:
Part of core organizing CSR team for 2.5 years and organised events for underprivileged kids every weekend. Helped educating them.
Post MBA Goals
Post MBA I want to work as a Product Manager in a global tech giant like Amazon, Tesla, Google. That's the reason for pursuing MBA as well, to get a global platform and be where all the action is going on. In long term i want to open a tech firm of my own.
Also I feel i have a drawback in terms of international exposure. But i have traveled over 20 state in India and 6 countries abroad.
Other school I plan to apply in: Kellogg, Sloan, Booth, Berkeley, Columbia
I would really appreciate if you can give me any feedback.