King407
Hi Mike,
Could you please help me with this?
Actually I ruled out A, C and E simply because the pronoun "he" is kind of ambiguous and could refer to either the CEO or the consultant
and out of B and D, I chose D as it completes the meaning of the sentence.
Can you please explain why E wins over D or even B?
I know that the correct answer is not always the ideal answer but shouldn't ambiguous pronoun issue take precedence over wordiness?
Dear
King407,
I'm happy to help. There are many good responses on this page, but because you ask, I will respond personally.
I assume that, after all the discussion on this page, you understand why
(A) &
(B) are irredeemably wrong, using the word "
economical" instead of "
economic."
It's important to understand that the pronoun is not as ambiguous as you think. You see, when the subject is also the principle actor and focus of the sentence, it's obvious that a pronoun that appears in a clause refers back to this overall subject.
In particular, the clause of consequence ("
so that . . . ") creates a powerful logical connection between the independent clause and the clause following the word "
that."
A did X so that he could . . .
See:
https://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/gmat-idiom ... nsequence/It's very clear that the subject of the "
that" clause has to be the same as A, the subject of the sentence overall. If the purpose of the action involves the original actor, then a single pronoun suffices to show the connection. If the CEO were doing something to make something possible for someone else, such as the consultant, this would have to be spelled out explicitly.
The CEO of Ergon did XYZ with the consultant, to allow the consultant to do PQR.
For all these reasons, the pronoun is not ambiguous at all. Thus choice
(E) is concise, clear, and not ambiguous in the least. That makes it considerably better than
(D).
Does all this make sense?
Mike