OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Quote:
A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.
A) had elected early retirement rather than deal
B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing
C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing
D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing
E) have elected to retire early rather than deal
• Split #1: verb tenseThe verb tense should be
in the present.
The article is "recent."
That article (present tense)
reports.
Finally, there are "
new rules [that are]
in place [now]" at the college.
Options A and B use a past tense verb,
had elected, which signals that the event is over or the deed is done.
No.
As of now, many professors
have elected to retire; they made that choice recently and in light of current events.
In addition, this verb tense does not allow for the possibility that more professors may choose to retire because they would rather not deal with the new rules, whereas the correct tense,
have elected, does allow for that possibility.
ELIMINATE A and B
(Option B also uses
instead of. GMAC strongly prefers
rather than.)
• Split #2: elect - infinitive or gerund? Elect (and its synonym,
choose) should be followed by an infinitive (
to retire), not a gerund (retiring).
Option C incorrectly states, ". . . have elected
retiring."ELIMINATE C
• Split #3: Parallelism•
Rather than compares two objects; the comparison must be parallel.
• option D uses
"to retire rather than dealing. . ."To retire and
dealing are not parallel.
ELIMINATE D
The best answer is E.• The infinitive
to retire, matches
face.→ This pair is different from the incorrect pair in (D).
-- (D) uses an infinitive and a gerund
-- (E) uses two infinitives.
→ the verb
face is elliptically constructed: before
face, the word
to is implied
→ so we have . . . elected
to retire rather than
[to] deal
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Ranforce7 , welcome to SC Butler.
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One speaker repeated something that Congressman Lewis had said, and I could not be in more agreement:
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