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1. 'had elected' vs 'have elected'

=> If there is any sequence of related events in past, we need to use past perfect. In this case, we do not find such sequence. No need to use past perfect.
Eliminate options A and B

2. elected retiring vs elected to retire

=> The idiom 'elect to' means to choose something. ( the correct idiom is 'elect to')
Eliminate options A,B and C

3. Eliminate option D because it fails to maintain parallelism. ( to retire rather than dealing)


Option E is the answer.
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A) had elected early retirement rather than deal
--Incorrect: past perfect is not required

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing
--Incorrect: past perfect is not required

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing
--Incorrect: retiring (fond of being on one's own) changes the meaning.

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing
-- Incorrect: Not parallel.

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal
-- Correct.
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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal (using of past perfect tense is not cool in asserting a fact)

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing (same error as in A)

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing (use of past progressive is also not right)

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing (same error as in C)

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal (Correct)
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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal
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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal

Hello guys!

Using POE,
Eliminate Option A, 'had' elected does not represent the accurate time sequence here.
Eliminate Option B, same as A and 'dealing' is an incorrect usage.
Eliminate Option C, 'retiring' and 'dealing' are unidiomatic expressions here.
Eliminate Option D, same as C.

Option E stands out.

It has a perfect usage and expresses the right meaning without any errors.

Answer:- Option E

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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal

Use of past perfect tense is not correct as the effect continues!

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing
Same as a, Instead of is used with phrases therefore instead of is incorrect.

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing

Use of past progressive tense is a problem

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing

to retire is not parallel with dealing

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal

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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal
- The action to retire has a continuing effect so we need present perfect (have) and not past perfect.

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing
- The action to retire has a continuing effect so we need present perfect (have).

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing
- we need elected to "verb".

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing
- Unparallel structure between to retire(verb) and dealing(gerund)

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal
- Correct idiom elected to retire and parallelism (verb/verb).
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A recent article reports that many professors had elected early retirement rather than deal with the new rules in place at Hambleton College.

A) had elected early retirement rather than deal - had+verb is used to represent a sequence of events in the past. There is just one event. Incorrect.

B) had elected early retirement instead of dealing - had+verb is used to represent a sequence of events in the past. There is just one event. Incorrect.

C) have elected retiring early rather than dealing - Correct the original error. But 'elected to retire' is preferred over 'elected retiring'. Incorrect.

D) have elected to retire early rather than dealing - Parallelism error. Incorrect.

E) have elected to retire early rather than deal - Parallel. 'elected to retire'. Correct

Hence, the answer is Option (E).
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