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I don't understand how we should know whether the GMAT wanted us to emphasize the difference in the importance of the ruined structure itself vs. the importance of the ruined structure being a church. find the difference between Choices B and D to be ever so subtle. I would be so appreciative to learn of your view. Thank you for your time.

You need to find the grammatically correct option that makes sense too. What GMAT/author wants us emphasise, we don't need to worry. The author could talk about either. But here, I see only one perspective.
A ruined structure was probably a church. This is indicated by A, B and C.
Now it doesn't matter how the author combines these two ideas as long as he/she does it correctly.

(B) A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, once probably being a church, was indicated by its eastward orientation, overall plan, and

We use 'being' for temporary states. The structure wasn't being a church; it was a church. In any case, the main clause makes no sense.

This is the main clause:
A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan ... was indicated by its eastward orientation, overall plan...

A ruined structure was not indicated. The fact that the ruined structure was a church is indicated by ...

(D) A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church, as indicates its eastward orientation and overall plan, as well as the

Main clause - A ruined structure found at Aqaba was probably a church (makes sense)

'as' functions as a pronoun meaning 'a fact that' so essentially it becomes like a noun clause (noun + modifier) which we see commonly (e.g. "a phenomenon explained by ... ")
Hence, we cannot use the verb 'indicates.' We need to use the past participle modifier 'indicated'
This is the reason this option is incorrect.
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A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church as indicated in its eastward orientation and by its overall plan, as well as artifacts, such as glass-oil lamp fragments, found at the site.
(A) A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church as indicated in its eastward orientation and by its overall plan, as well as
(B) A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, once probably being a church, was indicated by its eastward orientation, overall plan, and
(C) Indicating that a ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church were its eastward orientation and overall plan, but also the
(D) A ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church, as indicates its eastward orientation and overall plan, as well as the
(E) That a ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church is indicated by its eastward orientation and overall plan, as well as by the
Oops, I thought choice E has a ellipsis issue like the following....
(E1) That a ruined structure found at Aqaba, Jordan, was probably a church that is indicated by its eastward orientation and overall plan, as well as by

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It seems that choice E says:
That a ruined structure (subject) was (verb) probably a church that is indicated by its eastward orientation and overall plan, as well as by the
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KarishmaB GMATNinja EducationAisle @jonshukruat @ronpuruwel please clarify the parallelism issue in D? I unerstand 'indicate' is the correct usage but whats wrong in saying " as indicate its X and Y, as well as Z"? Indicate here is used in active voice but is followed by a subject , however what is wrong woth that? The posts above are not clear as i do not understadn the grammatical nuance ehind this being wrong. Inverted structures also are acceptable
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KarishmaB GMATNinja EducationAisle @jonshukruat @ronpuruwel please clarify the parallelism issue in D? I unerstand 'indicate' is the correct usage but whats wrong in saying " as indicate its X and Y, as well as Z"? Indicate here is used in active voice but is followed by a subject , however what is wrong woth that? The posts above are not clear as i do not understadn the grammatical nuance ehind this being wrong. Inverted structures also are acceptable

'as' is functioning as a pronoun here which is the same as 'a fact that'.

Check: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/as
You will see the various meanings 'as' can take. Here, 'a fact that' makes sense.
Then the use of active verb 'indicates' is not correct because the fact does not indicate anything. The fact is indicated by other things i.e. its eastward orientation etc.
Or we could just use the past participle (indicated by) to modify the pronoun.
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KarishmaB GMATNinja EducationAisle @‌jonshukruat please clarify the parallelism issue in D? I unerstand 'indicate' is the correct usage but whats wrong in saying " as indicate its X and Y, as well as Z"? Indicate here is used in active voice but is followed by a subject , however what is wrong woth that? The posts above are not clear as i do not understadn the grammatical nuance ehind this being wrong. Inverted structures also are acceptable
The punchline of our earlier post was that there's nothing inherently wrong with that structure.

Luckily, the verb is wrong (as you pointed out), so we don't have to worry about the "as well as" part in eliminating (D)!
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