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A —> change the meaning. Indeed, it seems that the intent of burin the chalice was to keep from being stolen by invaders
B —> having the pronoun IT, the sentence gives the intended meaning
C —> same meaning issue
D —> in order that should be IN ORDER TO
E —> same issue with meaning
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Ask yourself who buried the chalice and why. They buried it "to keep it from being stolen", not "to keep from being stolen". The second example sounds like they buried the chalice because they didn't want themselves to be stolen..


There is a sentence in Manhattan SC book.
Coffee was drunk by her to stay awake. - this sentence is wrong.

However I can apply the same philosophy by asking:
who drunk the coffee - her (she)
why - to keep her stay awake.

Can you advise why this sentence is wrong?

Thanks

If we know WHO performed the action of “drinking the coffee,” why would we want to avoid identifying “she” as the grammatical subject? If the purpose of the sentence were to just say that someone/anyone drank the coffee, then we would not need to mention “she.” However, if the purpose of the sentence is to identify “she” as the person who did the drinking, a more direct sentence makes more sense.

In the current problem, exactly “who” performed the action of “burying” is not made explicit. Further, this performer is not important to the context of the sentence. The point is to talk about the reason why these artifacts were buried, not who did the burying.

Passive Voice is neither awkward nor redundant in and of itself.

In other words, a sentence written in passive voice is not necessarily incorrect on the GMAT.

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dear avigutman, AndrewN,MartyTargetTestPrep , RonTargetTestPrep

I crossed off B because I think it is inappropriate, it will be better if we use itself, because the subject of the sentence is the same as the object.

then I cannot disguise between A and C,

so I guessed randomly

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I crossed off B because I think it is inappropriate, it will be better if we use itself, because the subject of the sentence is the same as the object.
Notice that it's not logical that the chalice was buried to "keep itself" from being stolen. After all, a chalice is not something we think of as doing something to keep things from happening to "itself."

So, actually, using "itself" there doesn't make sense. We need to use "it" instead.

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then I cannot disguise between A and C,

The (A) version conveys that the chalice chose to be "buried to keep from being stolen," as if the chalice had the intention of keeping from being stolen and therefore got itself buried. Since a chalice is not something we think of as having intention, that meaning doesn't make sense.

The (C) version conveys a similar meaning, that the chalice chose to be "buried to avoid being stolen," as if the chalice had the intention of avoiding being stolen and therefore got itself buried. Since a chalice is not something we think of as having intention, that meaning doesn't make sense either.

So, the best choice is (B).
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