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Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.

Examples to be mentioned using such as.

A) it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased - usage of while is somewhat fishy. Left and right of while are not balanced. Still hold, let's find another better option.

B) its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase - Left and right part of connector 'and' is not balanced.

C) it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing - Such as is correct idiom.

D) its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels - Such as is correct idiom.

E) its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol - Seems no error and sentence is balanced.

Imo. E
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My answer is (E), and it took me 1 minute 1 second to make the call.

In reading the original sentence, I notice its error rather easily. It can use parallelism for better organization and clarity.

(A) Technically not incorrect. But it should use parallelism for better organization and clarity.
(B) No parallelism between "the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides" and 'levels of "good" HDL increase'
(C) "Such ... as" should be used instead of "Such ... like"
(D) No parallelism between 'harmful triglyceride levels are reduced' and 'increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels'.
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A) it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased
Reducing X while Y are increased. Not parallel eliminate.

B) its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase

"Reduction of X" (Noun Phrase) and Y increase (clause); Not parallel.

C) it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing

Like for giving examples is wrong use.

D) its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels

X are reduced and increasing Wrong.

E) its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol

COrrect. parallel.
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Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.

Meaning: Tai chi as a form of physical activity might help to mitigate the risk of heart disease. How? It has some effects associated with it. These effects are: 1. a reduction in levels of triglycerides and 2. an increase in levels of good HDL cholesterol.
We need to ensure that these two effects are presented parallel to each other. With this in mind, let's take a look at the answer choices.

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A: Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.
To present the effects associated with tai chi in a parallel manner, the use of while is not appropriate. I expect to see X and Y, where X and Y are parallel to each other. I may be wrong, so I stand to be corrected. Nevertheless, X is: reducing levels of harmful triglycerides, Y is: levels of good HDL are increased. X and Y are not parallel. X, a participial phrase is not parallel to Y, a clause. Eliminate A.

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B: Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase.
X: the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and Y: levels of good HDL increase. X, a noun phrase, and Y, a clause, are not parallel. To correct this, we can rewrite Y as an increase in the levels of good HDL. Eliminate B.

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C: Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing.
X: the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides, and Y: levels of good HDL cholesterol are increasing. X, a noun phrase, and Y, a clause, are not parallel. In addition, reduction is a better action noun than the reducing, which is a complex gerund. The use of like is inappropriate. It should rather be as. Eliminate option C.

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D: Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels.
X: harmful triglyceride levels are reduced, and Y: increasing good HDL cholesterol levels. X, a clause is not parallel to Y, a participial phrase. Eliminate option D.

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E: Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol.
X: a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides, and Y: an increase in levels of good HDL cholesterol. both X and Y are noun phrases, and they are parallel to each other.

The answer is, therefore, option E.
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Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.
Definitely easier than the other one :lol:

Meaning: Tai Chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease. Why? Because it does two things: 1. Its effects include : reducing levels of harmful TC and levels of "good" HDL are increased.

Notice that two things are independent. Both are different effects of the same thing. The reduction in one is not causing the increase in other one.

Also, We need to maintain Parallelism. If we are using "reducing" then we need to use "increasing". And same will be case of reduction/increase.

Keeping all that in mind.

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A) it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased
C) it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing
D) its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels

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B) its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase - Voids Parallelism. The reduction cannot be parallel to "levels"
E) its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol - Perfect!
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Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.


A) it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased

B) its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase

C) it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing

D) its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels

E) its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol

All options has those highlighted parallelism error except option E, which makes it the correct answer.
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Hi generis, I have a question about HERE, #4. The correct answer [SPOILER] uses a structure such X that Y. Does that mean that such X that Y is a correct idiom, while such that is incorrect?

Btw, thanks much for sharing the list of OG questions for additional practice. This pack of questions allows me to conclude that there is no end in the study... lol.
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