OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 195: Sentence Correction (SC1)
• HIGHLIGHTS• This question tests parallelism
The sentence presents two effects of practicing tai chi: X goes up, Y goes down.
When two items are presented this way, you can assume that
(1) the question tests parallel structure, and
(2) the correct answer will list the items on either side of the construction in the same format
• This question also tests the idiom
Such X as Y.
-- You can eliminate two answers on the basis of a botched idiom,
Such X as Y More information about "such as" and "such X as Y" is below.
• I use questions such as this one to teach about concepts tested even when those concepts aren't the most important issues. (There is method to this madness. Stay tuned.)
I have changed the order of presentation in this post.
My "Notes" are just below "Comments."
THE PROMPTQuote:
Like other forms of physical activity, tai chi might help mitigate the risk of heart disease because it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) it has such effects as reducing levels of harmful triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL are increased
• the effects of tai chi are not written in parallel form.
--
reducing ___ is a verb-like noun phrase (a "gerund phrase, no verb) whereas
levels . . . are increased is a full clause (a noun plus a verb)
Eliminate A
Quote:
B) its effects include the reduction of levels of harmful triglycerides and levels of "good" HDL increase
• although the items in option B may seem to be parallel, they are not
• true,
reduction and
levels are both nouns.
• but
reduction of levels of ___ is a noun phrase (without a verb) whereas
levels of ___ increase is a full clause (with a verb)
Eliminate B
Quote:
C) it has such effects like the reducing of harmful levels of triglycerides while levels of "good" HDL cholesterol are increasing
• the idiom is
Such X as Y, not
Such X like YAlthough the words "such as" are split apart, still, we use
such as to introduce examples, not
such like.
• the items are not parallel; the problem is similar to that in option A.
--
the reducing of ___ is a gerund phrase (no verb) whereas
levels of ___ are increasing is a full clause (noun + verb)
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) its effects are such that harmful triglyceride levels are reduced and increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels
• the items are not parallel
--
harmful triglyceride levels are reduced is a full clause (with a verb) whereas increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels is a gerund phrase (a verbING phrase, no verb)
• the sentence is nonsensical
-- Its effects are such that increasing "good" HDL cholesterol levels. A verb is missing.
•
such that is almost never correct—in any context.
-- Almost never = I can't find one single correct answer that uses "such that."
-- See below. I discuss official examples that have tested "such that."
Eliminate D
Quote:
E) its effects include a reduction in levels of harmful triglycerides and an increase in levels of "good" HDL cholesterol
• the items are parallel and logically related.
--
a reduction in [bad cholesterol] and
an increase in [good cholesterol] are both noun phrases
-- the logic is clean: ABC decreases and DEF increases
Option E is the answerCOMMENTSI am happy to see posts from people I have not seen for awhile.
As always, I am happy to see posts from consistent participants.
Explanations range from good to excellent. Kudos to all.
• NOTES Such X as Y [and Z]Correct: Such X as Y and Z.
Correct: He enjoys playing such racket sports as tennis and squash.
Wrong: Such X like Y and Z
Wrong: He enjoys playing such racket sports like tennis and squash.
An official question in which the idiom is tested can be found
here.
Spoiler alert: that question is both good and difficult.
If you click on the link armed with what I just wrote, you will almost certainly know the answer.
SUCH THAT: avoid it in any context.In another question (a very good one), I included the information immediately below.
I doubt that my considerable effort was worth it. It appears that aspirants neither noticed nor cared.
I would care.
I'll try one more time, because "such that" is a fairly common issue.
SUCH THATI cannot find ANY official questions in which the phrase "such that" is correct.
I've listed six of the eight or nine official questions I found in which "such that" was part of an answer choice.
SPOILER ALERT: If you click on these links to official questions, you will know at least one incorrect answer.OFFICIAL QUESTIONS in which
such that is an option but not the correct answer.
HERE, #1HERE, #2HERE, #3HERE, #4HERE, #5HERE, #6 LIKE v. SUCH AS distinction? Still true?First, "such
like" is never correct, whether the phrase is in one piece or split apart.
Second, if at all possible, I would follow the guideline that we use
such as to introduce examples.
We do not use
like to do so.
Like is used for comparisons.
Some controversy exists about whether GMAC has abandoned the distinction between
such as and
like.
This issue is not easily settled.
At least one official question uses "like" in the
non-underlined portion of the question.
That question is
here.We don't have a choice. The word "like" introduces examples.
[Sidebar. In CR and RC, I have seen "like" used to introduce examples.
Do not rely on prose in CR, RC, or the official guides as an example of GMAC's position on an SC issue.]
Many people believe that GMAC will abandon this preference soon.
Before I saw
OG VR 2020, I might have agreed.
I thought that one question would disappear from
OG VR 2020.
The question explicitly tests
such as and
like to introduce examples, although both incorrect options that use
like have an additional error.
The question did not disappear from
OG VR 2020.
Its official explanation states:
The preferred way to introduce examples is with the phrase "such as," rather than with the word "like," which suggests a comparison.
Spoiler alert: two incorrect answers to an official question are revealed
The official question (
OG VR 2020 #310) is
HERE.
In addition to the statement above, the author of the OE writes:
(A)
Like should be replaced by
such as.
Have been becoming is an incorrect verb tense.
(D)
Like should be replaced by
such as.
Those of is unnecessary and awkward.
Have been becoming is an incorrect verb tense.
At this point I would not use
such as/like as the only basis upon which to eliminate an answer, but if you narrow the answers down to two, choose the one that uses "such as."