Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthqua

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Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were  constructed in violation of the city's building code.

(A) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were

(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been

(C) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been

(D) Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavily damaged some buildings that have been

(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake had been

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GMATNinja · Accepted Answer

This one is a classic, with a nice mix of mechanical and meaning issues. And it's even featured in this week's Topic of the Week:  our long-winded Beginner's Guide to GMAT SC.  Good times.

It makes no sense to say "destroyed and heavily damaged" -- it should be an "or", not an "and." And I'm also not crazy about the verb tenses, but we'll say more about that in a moment. Eliminate (A).

Hm, the "had been" makes a whole lot of sense here. Whenever you see "had + verb" (past perfect tense, if you like jargon), you'll want to look for some other action that happened later in the past -- generally, a later action that's in simple past tense. In this case "buildings... had been constructed in violation of the city's building code" certainly happened before the buildings "were destroyed or heavily damaged" in the earthquake.

That's a textbook, perfect use of past perfect. Keep (B).

The "and" problem is the same as in (A), and the verb tenses make no sense: it sounds like the buildings were built  after  they were destroyed in the earthquake, and that clearly isn't the point of the sentence. Eliminate (C).

This has the same verb tense error as in (C). So (D) is gone, too.

Hm, this looks an awful lot like (B). Verb tenses are fine.

So basically, we've eliminated (A), (C), and (D) based on somewhat mechanical errors, and now we're down to two choices. We discussed this situation -- and this exact example -- in detail in our  SC Guide for Beginners  this week. Let's compare these last two choices again, side by side:

(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been 
(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake had been

The only real difference is the placement of the phrase “last year.” In (B), “last year” is right next to “earthquake,” and it seems to be telling us that the earthquake occurred last year. That seems reasonable.

But (E) subtly expresses the wrong idea. “Last year” is right at the beginning of the sentence, suggesting that the entire first clause is the thing that happened last year: “some of the buildings…  … had been constructed in violation of the city’s building code.” But that doesn’t make sense: the buildings weren’t constructed last year.

So we can eliminate (E), and (B) is our winner.

HumptyDumpty · Answer

A)Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were 
"destroyed and heavily damaged" is nonsensical. A thing cannot be destroyed and damaged at the same time.
 B)Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been 
"Last year" modifies "earthquake". "Had been constructed" indicates the point in time before "were destroyed". Makes sense.
 C)Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been 
Wrong for the same reason as A.
 D)Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavly damaged some buildings that have been 
"Have been constructed" means that the buildings still stand illogically neglecting the earthquake.
 E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earth quake had been. 
"that were destroyed..." is a modifier of "the buildings", making "Last year" a modifier of "had been constructed".

ExpertsGlobal5 · Answer

Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-

Meaning is crucial to solving this problem: 
Understanding the intended meaning of this sentence is key to solving the question; the intended meaning is that some of the buildings that were either destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been constructed in violation of the city's building code.

Concepts tested here: Meaning + Tenses

• The past perfect tense (marked by the use of helping verb "had") is used when a sentence contains two actions in the past; the helping verb "had" is used with the action in the "greater past". 
• The present perfect tense (marked by the use of the helping verb “has/have”) is used to describe events that concluded in the past but continue to affect the present.

A:  This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "destroyed and heavily damaged"; the use of "and" illogically implies that the buildings were   both   destroyed   and   heavily damaged; the intended meaning is that the buildings were   either   destroyed   or   heavily damaged.

B:   Correct.  This answer choice uses the phrase "destroyed or heavily damaged", conveying the intended meaning - that the buildings were   either   destroyed   or   heavily damaged. Moreover, Option B uses the phrase "destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year", conveying the intended meaning - that the buildings were   destroyed   last year. Further, the sentence formed by Option B correctly uses the past perfect tense verb "had been constructed" to refer to the earlier of two actions that concluded in the past - the buildings being destroyed or heavily damaged and the buildings being constructed in violation of the city's building code.

C:  This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "destroyed and heavily damaged"; the use of "and" illogically implies that the buildings were   both   destroyed   and   heavily damaged; the intended meaning is that the buildings were   either   destroyed   or   heavily damaged. Further, the sentence formed by Option C incorrectly uses the present perfect tense verb phrase "have been destroyed" to refer to the earlier of two actions that concluded in the past - the buildings being destroyed or heavily damaged and the buildings being constructed in violation of the city's building code; remember, the past perfect tense (marked by the use of helping verb "had") is used when a sentence contains two actions in the past; the helping verb "had" is used with the action in the "greater past", and the present perfect tense (marked by the use of the helping verb “has/have”) is used to describe events that concluded in the past but continue to affect the present.

D:  The sentence formed by this answer choice incorrectly uses the present perfect tense verb phrase "have been destroyed" to refer to the earlier of two actions that concluded in the past - the buildings being destroyed or heavily damaged and the buildings being constructed in violation of the city's building code; remember, the past perfect tense (marked by the use of helping verb "had") is used when a sentence contains two actions in the past; the helping verb "had" is used with the action in the "greater past", and the present perfect tense (marked by the use of the helping verb “has/have”) is used to describe events that concluded in the past but continue to affect the present.

E:  The sentence formed by answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the clause "Last year some of the buildings...had been constructed"; the construction of this clause incorrectly implies that the buildings were   constructed   last year; the intended meaning is that the buildings were   destroyed   last year.

Hence, B is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Past Perfect Tense" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_EYnxPUldlA

To understand the concept of "Present Perfect Tense", you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNmT9obXukI

All the best!
Experts' Global Team

CrackverbalGMAT · Answer

Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were  constructed in violation of the city's building code.

(A) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were

(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been

(C) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been

(D) Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavily damaged some buildings that have been

(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake had been

A quick vertical scan shows us

- Destroyed or heavily damaged/destroyed and heavily damaged.
- The difference in the tenses used

As the buildings could be destroyed (completely)  or  could be heavily damaged and not both, we can  eliminate options A and C.

The meaning of the sentence tells us the timeline of the events and helps us identify the correct tenses to be used.

The events mentioned are-
Buildings were destroyed in the earthquake
The buildings were constructed in violation of the city's building code.

Which of the events happened first?

The buildings were first constructed and then they were destroyed by the earthquake. 
Hence we need to use the past perfect tense for the first event- “had been constructed” and simple past for the second event- “were destroyed in the earthquake”.  Eliminate A, C, and D.

Now, let's look at options B and E-

(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been

(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake had been

“Last year” modifies “earthquake” and hence it is best to place it as close as possible to “earthquake”

Hence B is correct.

VP
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walker · Answer

B

1. Buildings had been constructed before they were destroyed or heavily damaged. - we need Past Perfect
2. were destroyed  or  heavily damaged - 'and' is incorrect here, because a building cannot be destroyed of damaged simultaneously.
3. 'Some of the buildings that were .....' changes the meaning of 'Some buildings'.

sa2222 · Answer

Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were constructed in violation of the city's building code.

A)Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were 
B)Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been 
C)Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been 
D)Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavly damaged some buildings that have been 
E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earth quake had been.

My pick was B. But one question for everyone out there. What if we had one answer choice as - 
"Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were"

I know that "had been" or Past Perfect is used to indicate the sequence of events. But, if the above was one of the answer choice - then do we pick "were" or "had been". The reasoning being - Past Perfect is only used when required. Since the building were already destroyed as mentioned in the original sentence, obviously they were constructed before their destruction. In that case - the sequence of events could be depicted even without using Past Perfect. Please let me know - Expert thoughts??

Thanks!

sa2222 · Answer

Please read the questions at the bottom and advice - Thanks!

Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were  constructed in violation of the city's building code. 
A) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were 
B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been 
C) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been 
D) Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavily damaged some buildings that have been 
E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earth quake had been.

My pick was B. But one question for everyone out there. What if we had one answer choice as - 
"Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were"

I know that "had been" or Past Perfect is used to indicate the sequence of events. But, if the above was one of the answer choice - then do we pick "were" or "had been". The reasoning being - Past Perfect is only used when required. Since the building were already destroyed as mentioned in the original sentence, obviously they were constructed before their destruction. In that case - the sequence of events could be depicted even without using Past Perfect. Please let me know - Expert thoughts??

Thanks!

mikemcgarry · Answer

Dear sa2222 , I'm happy to respond. :-)

Here's what I'll say. The tense of verb, " were constructed " vs. " had been constructed ", is debatable. One could make an intelligent and credible argument for either one, and therefore it would be very hard to say that either one is clearly wrong. I will guess this is precisely why the question-writer interspersed the variations in verb tense with the " and "/" or " issue. The verb tense alone would not be enough to decide this question, which is why this question requires the " and "/" or " split to isolate the OA (B) . If the question included the choice you proposed, Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were then it would be an unfair question, because there would be no clear way to choose between this choice and choice (B) . Understand that grammar is not mathematics. Sometimes there is not a perfectly clear answer --- sometimes a question such as this, what's the best verb tense, is highly debatable, and good arguments could be made both for it and against it. I guess I would say that there's no other verbal indication in the sentence indicating the sequence of events. Logically we know that the buildings had to be built before the earthquake could destroy them, but we know that only on the basis of abstract logic: there's no word or phrase in the sentence that corroborates this logic. I would say, that's why we need the verb tense in the past perfect. The grammar always must be consistent with the logic, and if the logic is telling us something that the grammar doesn't tell us, there's a problem. That's why I think the past perfect is preferred, but I totally understand that another expert might say its not as preferred. It's just not black & white clear. Does all this make sense? Mike :-)

egmat · Answer

Hi! You are right that the past-perfect tense is used to clarify the sequence of events. However, that is only one of the two uses of this tense. The other use is to emphasize or impress on the sequence of events. When do we do so? We emphasize the chain of events if the earlier of the two actions has a bearing on the later action. The question at hand is a great example of both the accepted uses of past-perfect tense. Let’s look at choice B: Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been constructed in violation of the city's building code. The above sentence uses the past-perfect tense correctly. Not only does it conveys the sequence of event but also emphasizes the same. We need this emphasis because the earlier event has a direct bearing on the second event here. The damage to/destruction of the buildings is related to how they were constructed initially- hence, the use of past-perfect tense here. For this reason, I do not think the simple-past tense will be able to do justice to the intended meaning of the author here. Let’s consider a choice that uses the simple-past tense in both the verbs. So, it would be something like this: Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were constructed in violation of the city's building code. Now, I agree that technically destruction of/ damage to something can happen only after that thing has been constructed. Despite this common understanding, the above sentence leaves open a very slight possibility to misinterpret the meaning of the sentence. It could mislead the reader in to thinking that the construction refers to the restoration work on the buildings. This possibility, no matter how minute, does not exist in the correct choice. Also, as mentioned earlier, the emphasis on the sequence of events is of paramount importance to the intended meaning of the author. Hope the above discussion helps!

This question is from OG VR2. You can view our full length solutions to VR2 questions here : https://e-gmat.com/blogs/?cat=45 . Happy learning!

Regards, Neeti.

daagh · Answer

The final split is between B and E, no doubt. But B is better because of proper modification by the modifier “last year”. In B, the modifier phrase correctly modifies the earthquake, since it was the earthquake that occurred last year. In E, the phrase rather modifies some of the buildings giving a twist to the intended meaning as if the destroyed or damaged buildings were constructed last year.

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niks18 · Answer

There are two issues here -
1.  "were constructed"  is incorrect. Buildings were first constructed and then only they can be destroyed. Hence  "had been constructed"  is required here.

2.  "destroyed and heavily damaged" . anything that is destroyed cannot further be damaged. so it should be damaged or destroyed.

So only option  B & E  are the contenders

Option  E  makes "Last Year" the subject of the sentence that illogically implies that "Last Year.......had been constructed"

Hence Option   B

elegantm · Answer

Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were  constructed in violation of the city's building code. 
(A) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were 
 Best option out of rest. OR should have been used instead of AND. Correct.  
(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year  had been 
 GMAC prefers simple past for an action that happened in past. Hence Incorrect.  
(C) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year  have been  
 GMAC prefers simple past for an action that happened in past. Hence Incorrect. 
(D) Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavly damaged some buildings that have been 
 Changes the original intent since the sentence means that Earthquake destroyed only those buildings that were constructed in violation of city's building code. Hence Incorrect.  
(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earth quake  had been 
 GMAC prefers simple past for an action that happened in past. Hence Incorrect.

daagh · Answer

A few things to remember. 
1. The earthquake happened last year
2. The buildings were destroyed or damaged because of the earthquake, therefore by implication, essentially after the earthquake. 
3. The buildings had been constructed before the earthquake. 
4. The modifier and modified should be as close as possible.

Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were  constructed in violation of the city's building code.

(A) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year were -- 'destroyed and damaged, cannot happen together. It should be 'destroyed or damaged'

(B) Some buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year had been -- best option since the earthquake and last year are placed next to next.

(C) Some buildings that were destroyed and heavily damaged in the earthquake last year have been -- the same problem as in A

(D) Last year the earthquake destroyed or heavily damaged some buildings that have been -- A. Last year modifies all the events that follow namely 1. earthquake 2. destruction or damage and 3. construction, implying that all have happened in the same year. Obviously, this is illogical. B. The present perfect 'have been' may erroneously lead to think that the buildings have been reconstructed after the quake 
(E) Last year some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake had been -- same error as in D.
Therefore, B is the best.

adkikani · Answer

GMATNinja   VeritasPrepKarishma   egmat

is the usage of present perfect sentence - have been constructed - 
correct in (C) since the effect of construction was still applicable till last year,
 when unfortunately the earthquake destroyed them.

Skywalker18 · Answer

Hi  adkikani ,
Since the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake last year, present perfect have been constructed seems incorrect as the effect does not continue to the
present time.

EducationAisle · Answer

Indeed. This is actually a very  classical  usage of  Past Perfect .

Two  things happened in the past:

i) Destruction of some buildings last year

ii) Construction of buildings in violation of the city's building code

Both these events happened in the past and so, the event that happened  earlier  (Construction of buildings) is expressed as  past perfect  ( had been constructed ).

p.s. Our book    EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana    discusses  Past perfect tense , its application and examples in significant detail. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.

Aimfulmedal · Answer

I am having some difficulties with verb tenses. Can you guide how to approach such questions? I have read the conceptual part and got an idea about which tenses are used when , but still get the SC questions wrong based on tenses.

TheUltimateWinner · Answer

Hi  generis 
If I take out  Last year  from choice E, and put it after "earthquake", will it be correct choice?

The new version:
(E)  Last year  some of the buildings that were destroyed or heavily damaged in the earthquake  Last year   had been constructed in violation of the city's building code.

TheUltimateWinner · Answer

MartyTargetTestPrep ,  jennpt ,  AjiteshArun ,  ccooley ,  DmitryFarber ,  GMATNinja 
Could you help me with the  new version  of E? I'm really getting stuck in the new version. Is the new version of E legit?
Thanks__

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