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Hey GMAT ninja, for choice (c) cant the word (causing) be parallel to the word (slammed)...? they are both verbs i think ... right?

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This one isn't too awful, compared to some of the QOTDs we'll inflict on you later this week. For the most part, this is a nice story about straightforward uses of "that" and "which" modifiers, with some meaning stuff thrown in.

The uses of "that" and "which" can get nastier, though. Check out last Monday's YouTube webinar for more on the various uses of "that" on the GMAT... and we'll feature the other examples from the webinar as QOTDs later this week.

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A. which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks
"Which" can only modify "North America" here, and that makes no sense at all: "North America, which... marks the end of the geologic era"?! The placement of the "-ing" modifier doesn't seem great, either. Eliminate (A).

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B. which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking
Again, the modifier beginning with "which" is modifying "North America" again, and that makes no sense: "North America, which caused the plant and animal extinctions..." Eliminate (B).

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C. and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark
I'm OK with the use of "that" here, but the parallelism doesn't work. The parallelism marker "and" is followed by "causing plant and animal extinctions", and I can't find anything in the sentence that could possibly be parallel to "causing." (C) is gone.

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D. an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, and it marks
The last part of the underlined portion makes me hesitate: "it" could refer to "event", I guess. So "...an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, and the event marks the end of the geologic era..." That's not awful, but I really don't understand why we're starting a whole new clause there, with "event" as the subject. It makes a whole lot more sense when the end of the sentence says "... marks the end of the geologic era..." function as a modifier for "extinctions" -- and that's exactly what (E) does.

Since "it" is the subject of the second clause, you could also argue that it refers back to the subject of the first clause: "an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest." But that wouldn't really make much sense, either: the asteroid marks the end of the geologic era? Hm, not so sure about that one. But either way: even if you're OK with the pronoun, (E) does a much better job of conveying the meaning of the sentence.

Incidentally, there's another version of this answer choice in the verbal guide (any edition): "an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks..." Clearly, that's wrong for a different reason: "extinctions... marks" is a clear subject-verb error.

Either way, (D) is gone.

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E. an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark
(E) has two "thats", and they're both perfectly fine. The event caused the plant and animal extinctions, and the extinctions mark the end of the geologic era. Nice and clear. (E) wins.
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Hey GMAT ninja, for choice (c) cant the word (causing) be parallel to the word (slammed)...? they are both verbs i think ... right?
Hi sa800,

Slammed is a verb in this sentence, but causing isn't. In fact, these (-ing) structures are never "complete" verbs on their own.

1. An asteroid causing plant and animal extinctions. ← This is not a complete sentence (there's no verb for the subject).

2. An asteroid is causing plant and animal extinctions. ← An -ing can combine with a helping verb (in this case, is) to form a "complete" verb. We'll need to take a call on whether the present continuous tense is appropriate, but this sentence does have a subject-verb pair.
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Hi,

I think the question has been edited later because I could not see the current D option in anyone's explanation.
Can anyone please explain why D (the current one) is not right?

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Hi,

I think the question has been edited later because I could not see the current D option in anyone's explanation.
Can anyone please explain why D (the current one) is not right?
which is option D is intended to modify "extinctions"; so at the very least, we would expect the verb to be "mark" (and not "marks").
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks

(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking

(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark

(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks

(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark


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Here is my question: In options E and D, how is the appositive grammatically right, shouldn't the appositive set next to the noun that it's modifying, in this case what is (an event) actually modifying because if it's modifying north america, then it wouldnt be right
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https://www.nytimes.com/1996/11/26/science/asteroid-s-shallow-angle-may-have-sent-inferno-over-northern-kill-zone.html

SCIENTISTS have reconstructed an almost blow-by-blow account of the catastrophe that overtook the Earth 65 million years ago at the end of the age of dinosaurs.

They believe a marauding asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into Earth at a shallow angle, blasting an inferno of white-hot debris for thousands of miles across the young continent of North America and turning its mountains and valleys into killing fields.

The incinerated plants and animals were the first victims in a wave of global extinction that eventually erased hundreds of thousands of species from the face of Earth, marking the end the Cretaceous Period.
Many replies here discuss about "it " in option D. But I don't see any it there. Below is the option D (don't know if the question is edited and if yes, isn't it the best option compared to E?)
(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks
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This one isn't too awful, compared to some of the QOTDs we'll inflict on you later this week. For the most part, this is a nice story about straightforward uses of "that" and "which" modifiers, with some meaning stuff thrown in.

The uses of "that" and "which" can get nastier, though. Check out last Monday's YouTube webinar for more on the various uses of "that" on the GMAT... and we'll feature the other examples from the webinar as QOTDs later this week.

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A. which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks
"Which" can only modify "North America" here, and that makes no sense at all: "North America, which... marks the end of the geologic era"?! The placement of the "-ing" modifier doesn't seem great, either. Eliminate (A).

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B. which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking
Again, the modifier beginning with "which" is modifying "North America" again, and that makes no sense: "North America, which caused the plant and animal extinctions..." Eliminate (B).

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C. and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark
I'm OK with the use of "that" here, but the parallelism doesn't work. The parallelism marker "and" is followed by "causing plant and animal extinctions", and I can't find anything in the sentence that could possibly be parallel to "causing." (C) is gone.

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D. an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, and it marks
The last part of the underlined portion makes me hesitate: "it" could refer to "event", I guess. So "...an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, and the event marks the end of the geologic era..." That's not awful, but I really don't understand why we're starting a whole new clause there, with "event" as the subject. It makes a whole lot more sense when the end of the sentence says "... marks the end of the geologic era..." function as a modifier for "extinctions" -- and that's exactly what (E) does.

Since "it" is the subject of the second clause, you could also argue that it refers back to the subject of the first clause: "an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest." But that wouldn't really make much sense, either: the asteroid marks the end of the geologic era? Hm, not so sure about that one. But either way: even if you're OK with the pronoun, (E) does a much better job of conveying the meaning of the sentence.

Incidentally, there's another version of this answer choice in the verbal guide (any edition): "an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks..." Clearly, that's wrong for a different reason: "extinctions... marks" is a clear subject-verb error.

Either way, (D) is gone.

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E. an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark
(E) has two "thats", and they're both perfectly fine. The event caused the plant and animal extinctions, and the extinctions mark the end of the geologic era. Nice and clear. (E) wins.
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Hello,
Can you have a look to highlighted part, please?

Is it just "extinctions... marks or the combination of ''the plant and animal extinctions' marks......''?
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks

(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking

(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark

(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks

(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark

Hello Experts,
KarishmaB EducationAisle AjiteshArun ,

Is Plant and animal extinctions plural or singular ? ( if Plant and Animal extinctions is plural then we can reject CHOICE D because of SV disagreement errror)
which refers to Plant and Animal extinctions, hence which marks is incorrect. It should be which mark

Also, do we say extinction or extinctions ?

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Hello Experts,
KarishmaB EducationAisle AjiteshArun ,

Is Plant and animal extinctions plural or singular ? ( if Plant and Animal extinctions is plural then we can reject CHOICE D because of SV disagreement errror)
which refers to Plant and Animal extinctions, hence which marks is incorrect. It should be which mark

Also, do we say extinction or extinctions ?

Need your views :please:
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Hello PriyamRathor,

I will be glad to help you with this one. :)

The word "extinctions" is plural, while the word "extinction" is singular. Yes, Choice D is indeed incorrect because of the SV number agreement error. Choice E correctly uses the plural verb "mark" for "that" that stands for the plural noun "extinctions".

Both words are used according to the suitable context of the sentence.


Hope this helps. :)
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks

(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking

(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark

(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks

(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark

Hello Experts,
KarishmaB EducationAisle AjiteshArun ,

Is Plant and animal extinctions plural or singular ? ( if Plant and Animal extinctions is plural then we can reject CHOICE D because of SV disagreement errror)
which refers to Plant and Animal extinctions, hence which marks is incorrect. It should be which mark

Also, do we say extinction or extinctions ?

Need your views :please:
Regards

'extinctions' is plural. When we talk about extinction of multiple species, we use plural extinctions - nothing wrong here.
In option (D), 'which' refers to plural subject 'extinctions' but the verb 'marks' is singular so there is SV agreement error.
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks
(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking
(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark
(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks
(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark
Hello Experts,
As the verb 'caused' has been used as past form , shouldn't the tense of the verb 'mark' be in past form?
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GMATNinja - i find the use of the present tense 'mark' to be a bit bizarre; in my opinion it would make mone sense to say 'marked' instead, as the events we're talking about are clearly in the past. Does that make sense? Tks! :)
Good question! If we have more than one action in a sentence, it's possible that those actions could have different tenses - it all depends on logic and context. Here, have an example:

    "Tim, who once loved thrash metal but now prefers polka with just a hint of clarinet, has always had eclectic taste."

In this example, Tim "loved" one kind of music in the past, but "prefers" a different kind in the present. That's totally fine.

In the OA, it's true that the asteroid slammed into earth in the past, but the extinctions still "mark" the end of that geological era today. Put another way, if we'd used the past tense, "marked" it would suggest that those extinctions no longer mark the end of the era in question, and the timeline of events had been reevaluated. There's no reason to believe this is the case. Perhaps more importantly, the other answer choices don't give us the option of "marked," so there's no reason to use this as a decision point.

For more on verb tenses on the GMAT in general, check out this video.

I hope that helps!
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Thanks for the explanation.
GMAC did not pressurize us to make any decision on the basis of 'mark' and 'marked' as we are not bound to know everything that's going on (mark end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period) in this planet to make the choice correct in SC, right?
Am I missing anything?
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks
(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking
(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark
(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks
(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark
One more query:
What if the choice E is like below?
** an event that caused the plant and the animal extinction that mark
Would the creative choice be correct?

note: 'the' has been added ahead of 'animal extinction' and 's' has been removed from 'extinctions'
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Sixty-five million years ago, according to some scientists, an asteroid bigger than Mount Everest slammed into North America, which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks the end of the geologic era known as the Cretaceous Period.

(A) which, causing plant and animal extinctions, marks
(B) which caused the plant and animal extinctions marking
(C) and causing plant and animal extinctions that mark
(D) an event that caused plant and animal extinctions, which marks
(E) an event that caused the plant and animal extinctions that mark
Hello Experts,
As the verb 'caused' has been used as past form , shouldn't the tense of the verb 'mark' be in past form?

The tenses used by different verbs in the sentence depend on the time of the action they are conveying. They can all be different.
Here, 'caused' shows an event that happened in the past and 'mark' shows an event that is based in the present.

Understand the meaning of the sentence: The history of the Earth is divided into geological eras. They are based on certain features such as which plants and animals lived at that time (we have fossil record of which animals lived at what time).
As per some scientists, an asteroid crashed into Earth (so apparently we don't have conclusive proof of this else all scientists would have agreed) and caused many plant and animal extinctions. These extinctions mark the end of the Cretaceous era. We define the time up to these extinctions (starting from some point before ) as the Cretaceous period today. So these extinctions today mark the end of the Cretaceous period in our history books.

So an asteroid slammed (in the past) into NA, an event that caused (in the past) extinctions that mark (in the present - in the way we define our eras today) the end of the C era.

Hence the need to read books and articles from various different topics!
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