OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
However promptly the company responds to the recent decline in sales, they will need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent so as to remain competitive with its traditional rivals.
A) However promptly the company responds to the recent decline in sales,
they will need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent
so as to remain
B) However promptly the company responds to the recent decline in sales, it will need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent to remain
C) Even
if the company
should respond promptly to the recent decline in sales,
they will need to reduce prices by a minimum 10 percent
in remainingD) Even if the company promptly
responded to the recent decline of sales, it
will need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent to remain
E)
Regardless of if the company responds promptly to the recent decline in sales, it will need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent to remain[/quote]
• Split #1: pronoun-antecedent agreementA company is a collective noun and thus singular. The pronoun should be
it .
Options A and C improperly use
they to refer to
company.Eliminate A and C
(Also in option C: in U.S. ENglish and on the GMAT, the word
should is never in the IF clause..)
• Split #2: Conditional verb tensesIn option D,
will need should be
would needClauses that begin with
even if behave just as regular IF-clauses do.
When an IF clause begins with a past tense verb, the main verb (in the "then" clause) must contain a verb in the conditional tense such as
would.
→ the simple past (
responded) should not be paired with the future (
will need)
Eliminate D
Regarding (D): This whole sentence sounds strange to me. I would say:
Even if the company
were to respond promptly to the recent decline of sales, it
will would need to reduce prices by at least 10 percent to remain competitive with its traditional rivals.)
Split #3 - Idiom - there is no such things as regardless of ifOption E uses
regardless of if, which is both not idiomatic and makes my ears hurt.
The correct phrase is
regardless of whether.
The answer is B-- the singular pronoun
it is used to refer to the singular noun
company-- the verbs are logical. The combination of present tense and future is logical. The sentence describes what the company must do in the future.
• NOTESCompany as a collective noun?
Yes.
Company = collective noun = singularOverwhelmingly, collective nouns are singular.
But the words
people and
police are collective nouns and they are
always plural.]
However?In this context it means
in whatever way, or
no matter how—not
although.
→
However it is served, I do not eat fish.→
However he tried to explain the math problem, his students stared blankly at him.SO AS TO?Avoid it.
AFter having examined thousands of questions, as far as I can tell, on the GMAT,
so as to has never been part of a correct answer.
--
so that or
in order to are preferred
-- I wrote about
so as to (as well as so that, so X as to Y, and so X that Y) in
this post, here.
COMMENTS akhilvarma8 and
MBADream786 , welcome to SC Butler.
[Do you all ever wonder how I remember whether I've seen your name on SC Butler threads?
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As always, I am glad to see you all.
Some explanations are good; a couple are excellent.
Nice work. Kudos to all.