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A city's economy can be boosted for years by a two-week Olympics, as evidenced by 2000 Summer Games host Sydney, Australia, where the numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase between 2001 and 2003.

A. numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase

B. numbers of annual convention attendees grew more than 200%

C. numbers of annual convention attendees were raised by more than 200%

D. number of annual convention attendees increased by more than 200%

E. number of annual convention attendees was raised by more than a 200% increase

Hints : Numbers/Number,Active voice/Passive voice

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answer cannot be E
you cannot have raise and increase together..
D is better and should be the right choice..
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Numbers of - It is incorrect.

Icrease - Gradual rise over a period of time

further raised + Increase in wordy , hence straight (D)
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A city's economy can be boosted for years by a two-week Olympics, as evidenced by 2000 Summer Games host Sydney, Australia, where the numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase between 2001 and 2003.

A. numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase

B. numbers of annual convention attendees grew more than 200%

C. numbers of annual convention attendees were raised by more than 200%

D. number of annual convention attendees increased by more than 200%

E. number of annual convention attendees was raised by more than a 200% increase

Hints : Numbers/Number,Active voice/Passive voice

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answer cannot be E
you cannot have raise and increase together..
D is better and should be the right choice..
The first part before the first comma is an independent clause. In second part 'as' indicate also an independent clause. So, why D is not run-on sentence?
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A city's economy can be boosted for years by a two-week Olympics, as evidenced by 2000 Summer Games host Sydney, Australia, where the numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase between 2001 and 2003.

A. numbers of annual convention attendees grew by more than a 200% increase

B. numbers of annual convention attendees grew more than 200%

C. numbers of annual convention attendees were raised by more than 200%

D. number of annual convention attendees increased by more than 200%

E. number of annual convention attendees was raised by more than a 200% increase

Hints : Numbers/Number,Active voice/Passive voice

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answer cannot be E
you cannot have raise and increase together..
D is better and should be the right choice..
The first part before the first comma is an independent clause. In second part 'as' indicate also an independent clause. So, why D is not run-on sentence?

"As" introduces a dependent clause, not an independent clause. You cannot use " as evidenced by..." alone without the independent clause before comma.
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answer cannot be E
you cannot have raise and increase together..
D is better and should be the right choice..
The first part before the first comma is an independent clause. In second part 'as' indicate also an independent clause. So, why D is not run-on sentence?

"As" introduces a dependent clause, not an independent clause. You cannot use " as evidenced by..." alone without the independent clause before comma.
When we differentiate AS and LIKE, then we say that LIKE is used for noun and AS is used for clause. So, THIS clause is what? does it indicate dependent clasue?
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The first part before the first comma is an independent clause. In second part 'as' indicate also an independent clause. So, why D is not run-on sentence?

"As" introduces a dependent clause, not an independent clause. You cannot use " as evidenced by..." alone without the independent clause before comma.
When we differentiate AS and LIKE, then we say that LIKE is used for noun and AS is used for clause. So, THIS clause is what? does it indicate dependent clasue?
Thank you sayantanc2k

Yes, "as" introduces a dependent clause. It is not possible to construct a sentence only with an "as"- clause.

(Your confusion might have probably been caused because you thought the word "as" is outside the clause. "As" is within the clause - it is not as+clause.)
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Since the count of annual convention attendees would be a single number, the sentence should use number, not "numbers." There's also a redundancy error, since "grew" already implies an "increase." Due to these errors, (A) can be eliminated.

A vertical scan reveals that (B) and (C) also incorrectly use "numbers" and can be eliminated.

Next, examine (D) and (E). (E) unnecessarily introduces the passive voice and still contains the redundant "raised" and "increase." (D), however, correctly uses the singular "number," uses the active voice, and contains no redundancy. (D) is therefore correct.

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Though "D" is correct options based on NUMBERs/NUMBER logic, yet how a it can be in a active voice.

"Number should be increased by something" right? Please explain.
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