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An attempt to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago, has had no success despite the willingness of the Democratic Party to back a female candidate.
(A) to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago
(B) begun 15 years ago, to elect a woman as President of the United States
(C) begun for electing a woman as President of the United States 15 years ago
(D) at electing a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago
(E) that has begun 15 years ago to elect a woman as President of the United States

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OE says E has incorrect tense. GMATNinja Would you please explain what could have been the correct tense in E
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This question has to do with word order. The attempt was begun fifteen years ago. Options A and D could imply that the United States was begun fifteen years ago. C has poor word order by splitting ‘begun’ and ‘fifteen years ago’. It also incorrectly uses ‘for electing’. E uses the wrong tense. Choice B is the correct answer.
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is it a comma issue ? or infinitive clues issue ?
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is it a comma issue ? or infinitive clues issue ?

Added the OE for you to refer. I believe it's more about placement issue.
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An attempt to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago, has had no success despite the willingness of the Democratic Party to back a female candidate.
(A) to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago -displaced modifier
(B) begun 15 years ago, to elect a woman as President of the United States -Correct
(C) begun for electing a woman as President of the United States 15 years ago - To elect is correct; "15 years ago" is too far from begun
(D) at electing a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago - "at electing" is wrong
(E) that has begun 15 years ago to elect a woman as President of the United States -Incorrect verb tense. "An attempt that began"is correct
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An attempt to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago, has had no success despite the willingness of the Democratic Party to back a female candidate.
(A) to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago -displaced modifier
(B) begun 15 years ago, to elect a woman as President of the United States -Correct
(C) begun for electing a woman as President of the United States 15 years ago - To elect is correct; "15 years ago" is too far from begun
(D) at electing a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago - "at electing" is wrong
(E) that has begun 15 years ago to elect a woman as President of the United States -Incorrect verb tense. "An attempt that began"is correct


Hey, Are you sure the correct tense in E would be began, because in such case, the tense all over the sentence (has had)would not be uniform?
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TaN1213 wrote:
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is it a comma issue ? or infinitive clues issue ?

Added the OE for you to refer. I believe it's more about placement issue.

Hey Tan123,
I was convinced with B, until I saw option E. Can you elaborate that what is wrong with the tense use.

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Hi Expert,
What is wrong with the tense form in option E. I was convinced with B until I sawoption E.

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TaN1213 wrote:
Sager wrote:
is it a comma issue ? or infinitive clues issue ?

Added the OE for you to refer. I believe it's more about placement issue.

Hey Tan123,
I was convinced with B, until I saw option E. Can you elaborate that what is wrong with the tense use.


I, too, am having the same doubt, which is why I have requested GMATNinja, in spoiler section, to clarify it.

Expert,

Please confirm whether the following understanding about tense issue in E is correct-

'Has'- present perfect- is inconsistent with 'had' - past perfect.
Further, in such case, isn't simple past - that began- sufficient? Or the sentence needs the structure- that had begun ?
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An attempt to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago, has had no success despite the willingness of the Democratic Party to back a female candidate.
(A) to elect a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago -displaced modifier
(B) begun 15 years ago, to elect a woman as President of the United States -Correct
(C) begun for electing a woman as President of the United States 15 years ago - To elect is correct; "15 years ago" is too far from begun
(D) at electing a woman as President of the United States, begun 15 years ago - "at electing" is wrong
(E) that has begun 15 years ago to elect a woman as President of the United States -Incorrect verb tense. "An attempt that began"is correct


Hey, Are you sure the correct tense in E would be began, because in such case, the tense all over the sentence (has had)would not be uniform?


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Let me try to answer your questions.

1. "Hey, Are you sure the correct tense in E would be began, because in such case, the tense all over the sentence (has had)would not be uniform?"
--Yes, it should be "began". We use present perfect tense to show the continuity of an even that started in the past. In the given sentence, the attempt is still not continuing to begin right now, it began in the past and its effects are still felt. So the event "beginning of attempt" should be represented with a simple past; thus "began" should be used instead of "has begun".

2. "Please confirm whether the following understanding about tense issue in E is correct-'Has'- present perfect- is inconsistent with 'had' - past perfect."
--Usage of "has had" is absolutely correct here. We need "had" to depict the completion of an event and "has" to show the impact of the attempt that is still visible i.e. no success.

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I, too, am having the same doubt, which is why I have requested GMATNinja, in spoiler section, to clarify it.

Expert,

Please confirm whether the following understanding about tense issue in E is correct-

'Has'- present perfect- is inconsistent with 'had' - past perfect.
Further, in such case, isn't simple past - that began- sufficient? Or the sentence needs the structure- that had begun ?
Thanks!

There are a whole bunch of issues in here, and some of them don't seem to appear on the actual GMAT very often! The usual friendly warnings apply here about non-official verbal questions: GMAC spends somewhere between $1500 and $3000 developing each question, and even the very best test-prep companies can't quite compete with that.

I'm not sure if this is part of the issue, but for starters: "begun" in (B) isn't a verb at all -- it's actually an adjective. Consider these:

    1. Burritos smothered in green chile make Charles happy. --> "smothered" sounds like a verb, but it's actually an adjective
    2. Burritos eaten with unbridled joy will not make you fat. --> "eaten" sounds like a verb, but it's also an adjective
    3. The project started by Amber in 1998 will be complete in 2019. --> "started" is also an adjective...
    4. The project begun by Amber in 1998 will be complete in 2019. --> ... and so is "begun" in this case

More on these "-ed" words in this crusty old article: https://gmatclub.com/forum/experts-topi ... 40280.html

gmatexam439 is correct about the verb tense issues in (E). I'm not sure, but it sounds like part of the misconception might be that you're assuming that the word "had" automatically indicates the past perfect tense, and that's not quite right:

    1. Domenico had a colonoscopy this morning. --> simple past tense
    2. Domenico has had monthly colonoscopies since 2007. --> present perfect tense, indicating an action that starts in the past and continues in the present (presumably, Domenico will continue having monthly colonoscopies)
    3. Domenico had had several colonoscopies before he decided that his rectum is exit-only. --> "had had" is past perfect tense, and must indicate an action that happens in the past, before some other action or "marker" in the past (in this case, "he decided" is the later action in the past, so this sentence is acceptable)

(For a long-winded hour on verb tenses, feel free to check out this webinar: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fxANHcxwbeM.)

In this particular sentence, "begun" is just an adjective in (B), so that's completely fine. For (E) to be correct, "has begun" would have to be changed to "began", since the action of STARTING the attempt happened exclusively in the past. It would be wrong to use the present perfect "has begun", because the action of STARTING the attempt is already completed.

I hope this helps!
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Further discussion :

Thanks GMATNinja for your detailed explanation.

Btw, I realized also that B and E have a different construction.

(B) begun 15 years ago, to elect a woman as President of the United States.
As GMATNinja explained, "begun" is not a verb, but an adjective.
Long version : An attempt, which was begun 15 years ago... Here we shortened the sentence become "An attempt begun..."

(E) that has begun 15 years ago to elect a woman as President of the United States
However in E, the tense is written in ACTIVE, so "An attempt that has begun".
Regardless of the wrong tense, does this sufficient to say that this is wrong?

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It was tricky because answer A seems right. Choice B is slightly better, since begun stands closer to attempt.

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