Hi
jaja231 !
jaja231 wrote:
Hi Maria,
I'm using
ApplicantLab for this upcoming application cycle, but I was wondering if you could take a look at my profile and let me know if you think I'd be a good fit at the schools I am applying to and if there is anything I can do to improve my profile before applying in September? (Besides using
ApplicantLab for help writing my essays and fine tuning my resume of course).
Background and nationality: Male, White, US citizen, 27 years old (at time of matriculation).
Undergrad Information: BBA in finance from Top 30 Public University with a 3.2 GPA (I had one bad semester where I dealt with depression from the death of my best friend, dragging down my GPA. I plan to use the optional essays to explain this). Additionally, I have taken three MBA-level courses from Harvard Business School through their CORe Requirements program, which I completed with Honors.
GMAT: 730 (Q 47, V 44, IR 6, AWA 6)
Ok, so this is a solid foundation for an MBA profile -- the one bad semester is explainable, and the GMAT helps balance out the GPA anyway!
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Work experience and leadership: At the time of applying, will be 5 years working as a financial analyst for major bank with one promotion to intermediate analyst. I, along with some of my colleagues, lead a team of analysts based in India, I have led many projects and worked on the largest project my office has ever done, and have mentored some of the associates on my team. I also spent a month working in Italy during my time at this company.
I think you'll get a lot out of trying to find "resume twins" and see where they ended up going to school -- when other "intermediate financial analysts" from your firm apply to b-school, where do they normally end up? This can help serve as a litmus test of how your background will be viewed.
It's good that you have leadership experience -- be sure to highlight that EQ in the essays, since the stereotype is that finance-types lack EQ!
Re: working on "the largest project my office has ever done", how this is viewed will depend upon what your exact role was on the project. Not necessarily your formal title within the team, but more "What did he do to move the project forward / propose new ideas / persuade others of a different view?"
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I have also co-founded a small company with a few colleagues that runs a free website dedicated to writing articles that teach personal finance and investing, among other things, to people who have little to no previous finance experience.
I would treat this as an "Extra curricular" on the resume and not as "professional experience" (just in case you were wondering where it would go.
I think this is interesting but it will really only "count" if you have a significant readership, have been reblogged by a well-known publisher, etc. The reason I say this is that this
might be viewed essentially as "having a blog" (albeit with a few friends), but a TON of people have blogs these days (and sometimes I'll see one on a resume, find it online, and discover that it only has like 10 articles and no apparent readership.
SO yes, mention it (and especially if it's generated revenue or big readership #s) -- but it will be seen as "huh, interesting" only because sooooo many people have blogs!
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Community and others: I have been on the board of a local non-profit Irish Heritage organization for the past two years. I have mentored four undergraduate students at the University I graduated from over the past two years. Member of an environmental organization since the beginning of this year, where I have written letters to local and state politicians and been part of campaigns to get local businesses to go green. Additionally, I've volunteered with Meals on Wheels for the past year.
Being on the board of a non-profit is good!
The other 3 things though may not be worth the resume "real estate" -- by that I mean, I'd rather see, say, 4 lines of text / bullet points really explaining your leadership impact at the non-profit where you're a board member vs. 1 separate line of text for each of the 4 activities.
Being on a board has probably given you strong leadership experience -- the mentoring of undergrads could perhaps go in the *application form* under extra-currics, but probably doesn't merit that precious precious resume space.
The other two -- writing letters for the environment and doing meals on wheels -- are nice, but may not be leadershippy / impactful enough to include.
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Recommenders: One is my current supervisor, who has been my boss since I started my career. The second is his boss, who has given me projects directly and helped advance my career.
Sounds good! Make sure at least one of them compares you favorably to others from your firm who have also gone on to MBA programs.
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Post MBA goals: Immediate goal of wanting to switch to management consulting to experience problem solving at its highest level in different industries. I know most don't stick with consulting for longer than 5 years, so my long term goal is to start my own company that uses finance to help solve some of the issues facing the environment.
The short-term goal feels a little bland and not specific enough. If you're going to say consulting, wouldn't you try to find a firm that can give you insight into a specific industry? I think a lot of people don't realize that for every consultant who gets staffed on a "Sexy" project, there are five who get stuck doing supply-chain work for a fish farm in Idaho (or something like that).
What I would do is first re-evaluate the long term goal, and then work backwards from there to identify the best post-MBA goal.
Even if your real long-term goal is financing environmental projects, IMHO you have not sufficiently "walked the talk" of the environment mattering to you. Writing a few letters isn't quite the same as, say, being involved with the World Wildlife fund for 4 years and running a fund-raiser for them (for example). So a cynical adcom, wary of banker applicants who suddenly seem to find their social consciences just in time to apply to b-school [imagine that!] looking at your actual commitment to that goal with a bit of skepticism. I'M not saying that you're not actually committed to that goal, I'm just saying that's how it will probably look.
So given that, go through the Career Vision module of the Lab and try to find something that flows more logically from where you've been in the past.
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Schools I am applying to: Kellogg, Booth, Ross, Stern, Cornell Johnson, Fisher. Possibly also either Darden or McDonough depending on how things go.
If consulting (and environmental stuff) is your real-life goal,
I don't think you should apply with that story, but I DO think you should take a really serious look at Duke Fuqua. They send a decent amount of the class into consulting, plus they offer TWO ways to focus your studies on environment stuff -- check out this major, which seems 100% up your alley: "MBA Concentration in Energy Finance"
https://go.fuqua.duke.edu/data/fuquawor ... tions.htmlOn your list, I'd swap out Fisher and replace with Fuqua. In fact if you research the MBA in Energy Finance OR Duke's "MBA Concentration in Energy & Environment" and find it really compelling, it might become your first choice and if so, if you apply via their Early Action round, your chances go up. Even if you don't apply via EA, note that Duke has an "open interview period" from Sept - Oct where, similar to Kellogg, you can schedule an appointment to interview, thus guaranteeing an interview. Finally, Darden also has open interviews but it's ONLY open to their early action applicants.
I think the challenge for you will be 1) coming up with a compelling / interesting / realistic career goal based on "evidence" from your past and 2) using EQ / leadership stories to stand out from the zillion other white male bankers
Hope this helps!,
Maria