dave13
abhimahna
StrugglingGmat2910
sir Can you please clarify why A is wrong
according to pronoun rule :his/her can refer to apostrophes and he and she can only refer to noun
but in the above sentence when we use: that Baldwin wrote in France while he was living there . why can't the he refer to the baldwin mentioned
Hey
StrugglingGmat2910 ,
Problem with A is that we have two nouns to which "he" can refer to.
It could be either the professor or Baldwin. Therefore, the meaning is ambiguous here. Who was living in france?
Does that make sense?
hey
AndrewN its me again
abnimahna mentions that there are two nouns in option A but doesnt option E have the two nouns

" the professor or Baldwin" so "He" could refer to the professor or Baldwin in option E as well

Hello,
dave13. How about we look at the sentence in question?
Quote:
A professor at the university has taken a sabbatical to research
on James Baldwin’s books that Baldwin wrote in France while he was living there.
The real issue is that, as has been mentioned above, the
verb research is not followed by a preposition. (Contrast this with the
noun research, which can, in fact, use a preposition—
The professor left on sabbatical to conduct research on/into [something].) I do not see an ambiguous
he because the present perfect
has taken precludes it. If you view the sentence as though
he may refer to the professor, you get a garbled mess:
A professor... has taken a sabbatical to research... while he was living there.If the simple past
took were used instead, I could see the problem, but with
has taken, I expect a present-tense
is living (or
lives) to agree with it. Jumping back into the past simply makes no sense.
If we compare (A) and (E) side by side, we can expose other flaws:
Quote:
A professor at the university has taken a sabbatical to research
(A) on James Baldwin’s books that Baldwin wrote in France while he was living there.
(E) the books James Baldwin wrote while he lived in France
The repetition in (A) of both
Baldwin and, in a manner of speaking,
France (the referent of
there) is unnecessary and hampers the expression of vital meaning. For all these reasons, (A) can safely be eliminated.
I hope that helps. Thank you for thinking to ask me about this one.
- Andrew