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It may seems that C is in-correct for question-4 But infact it is correct answer.
OE: Options D & E explains only section of the passage and they leave out the all-important opinion and prescription of the author.
A is off topic.
B- Author is not defending the YES against criticism.
C- Perfectly captures the primary purpose. To give the author's opinion about how to save YES. The first 3 paragraph are only there as set-up for the final all important paragraph.
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I think Q1 and Q4 is wrong

1-A
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For Q4: In my opinion, not all of the choices is perfect, but choice D at least covers it more broadly. Choice E is only mentioned in the final paragraph with two distinct examples. I do not think E is the right answer.

(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program

For choice D: Author mentions the criticisms in the first paragraph and outline challenges in the 2nd and 3rd paragraph and finally mentions lack of press coverage (that is a problem), thus (IMO) answer should be D.

For Q1: The author barely mentions some solutions to overcome recent challenges. Choice E is the best wrong choice.

This is a tricky question my friend. For question-4 i have already mentioned the OE. And For Question-1:

A- too narrow and leaves out all important 4th paragraph. The passage goal is not highlight difficulties but rather to highlight author's opinion of how to fix it. C is also too narrow.
B & D: are way too broad- The passage is about specifics of YES program not about federal programs in general.

E has proper scope and topic. The passage is about YES program and the author's ideas for how to overcome recent difficulties.
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Hi,

For Question 1,

Let me summarize the para

Para 1,What is YES, and Author shows concern about the future of YES is uncertain.

Para2, Complaint one, Regarding the funding of the business idea. Its being YES distributes have dis proportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families. But there is no such substantive claim.

Pata2,another complaint/challenges , misusing of fund by elder people.

Para 3, Positive outcome of YES, Two success stories are mentioned and due to poor media action , there was little media coverage.
and author advice the administrator given in one of the program’s own publications.

Now coming to the option E, where does the author mentions How to overcome the recent challenges,
The only line which the author has advice was the last line of the final paragraph, see below.

"The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program’s own publications: “No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”

and in all the other para only complaint & challenges were discuss. No where any solution or advice is mentioned.

So , merely with line highlighted above , we cant say such statement that author has mentioned How to overcome recent challenges?

and similar line of reasoning is application for Question 4, option C, although option E is also not a good option. Still Option C is also not the best among the other options.

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2. The author of the passage would most likely describe YES as a _______.
(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair
(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors
(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility
(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged
(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding


Could you please explain Answer D for Q2

(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair

Not so. The author tells us about the success stories and how the organisation can do better - by trumpeting these stories.

(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors

The factors are internal too such as YES spokesperson denied the story and then retracted. Besides, noble may not be the right word.

(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility

The way of improvement the author has suggested is "trumpeting the stories", not greater fiscal responsibility.

(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged

This is correct. YES has been facing problems but has had successes. Also, elimination of other 4 choices which are certainly incorrect helps arrive at this as the answer.

(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding

Not true. The author doesn't consider it a waste.
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The answer to question no. 4 is indeed (C). When we say "primary purpose" would be the one that covers the entire passage, we are giving you one way of recognising the primary purpose. What role does the conclusion play in an argument? It is what gives the opinion of the author. It is the reason the author writes the argument.
The primary purpose has exactly the same role in an RC passage - it is the reason the author writes the passage.

The author introduces the program, gives the issues it is facing, talks abt the success stories and how the program has not capitalised on them. And then he closes with an advice to the program. This is the purpose of writing the entire passage.
Even though in a large part of the passage he details the problems being faced, was his intention just to point out the problems? No, he wanted to give advice on how to improve the program. That is the point he wants to make.

Dear VeritasKarishma,

Why is choice A. wrong?
Is it wrong because of the word "detail"?
I think the author's suggestion in the latter part in the last paragraph is very similar to "the approach that should be taken in remedying YES's public relations problems" in choice A.

The passage mentions "ACTIVE APPROACH to public relations" in the last sentence.
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The answer to question no. 4 is indeed (C). When we say "primary purpose" would be the one that covers the entire passage, we are giving you one way of recognising the primary purpose. What role does the conclusion play in an argument? It is what gives the opinion of the author. It is the reason the author writes the argument.
The primary purpose has exactly the same role in an RC passage - it is the reason the author writes the passage.

The author introduces the program, gives the issues it is facing, talks abt the success stories and how the program has not capitalised on them. And then he closes with an advice to the program. This is the purpose of writing the entire passage.
Even though in a large part of the passage he details the problems being faced, was his intention just to point out the problems? No, he wanted to give advice on how to improve the program. That is the point he wants to make.

Dear VeritasKarishma,

Why is choice A. wrong?
Is it wrong because of the word "detail"?
I think the author's suggestion in the latter part in the last paragraph is very similar to "the approach that should be taken in remedying YES's public relations problems" in choice A.

The passage mentions "ACTIVE APPROACH to public relations" in the last sentence.

The passage just mentions that the media problem should be remedied. It doesn't say what approach should be taken and doesn't give any details for sure.

“No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”
means that public relations need to be pursued. How, when, what etc is not given.
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Young Enterprise Services (YES) is a federal program created to encourage entrepreneurship in 14- to 18-year-olds who have already shown a clear aptitude for starting business ventures. The program, started in 2002, has provided loans, grants, and counseling—in the form of workshops and individual meetings with established entrepreneurs—to over 7500 young people. The future of YES, however, is now in jeopardy. A number of damaging criticisms have been leveled at the program, and members of the congressional agency that provides the funding have suggested that YES may be scaled down or even dismantled entirely.

One complaint is that the funds that YES distributes have disproportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families, despite the program’s stated goal of being blind to any criteria besides merit. Though no one has claimed that any of the recipients of YES funds have been undeserving, several families have brought lawsuits claiming that their requests for funding were rejected because of the families’ relatively high levels of income. The resulting publicity was an embarrassment to the YES administrators, one of whom resigned.

Another challenge has been the admittedly difficult task of ensuring that a young person, not his or her family, is truly the driving force behind a venture. The rules state that the business plan must be created by the youth, and that any profits in excess of $1,000 be placed in an escrow account that can only be used for education, investment in the venture, and little else, for a period that is determined by the age of the recipient. Despite this, several grants had to be returned after it was discovered that parents—or in one case, a neighbor—were misusing YES funds to promote their own business ideas. To make matters worse, the story of the returned monies was at first denied by a YES spokesperson who then had to retract the denial, leading to more bad press.

In truth, YES has had some real success stories. A 14-year-old girl in Texas used the knowledge and funding she received through the program to connect with a distributor who now carries her line of custom-designed cell phone covers. Two brothers in Alaska have developed an online travel advisory service for young people vacationing with their families. Both of these ventures are profitable, and both companies have gained a striking amount of brand recognition in a very short time. However, YES has been pitifully lax in trumpeting these encouraging stories. Local press notwithstanding, these and other successes have received little media coverage. This is a shame, but one that can be remedied. The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program’s own publications: “No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”

1. Which of the following would be the most appropriate title for this passage?
(A) “Recent Difficulties in the YES Program”
(B) “Federal Entrepreneurship Programs for Young Adults”
(C) “Successes of the YES Program”
(D) “Common Challenges Facing Federal Programs”
(E) “The YES Program: How to Overcome Recent Challenges”


2. The author of the passage would most likely describe YES as a _______.
(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair
(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors
(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility
(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged
(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding


3.3. All of the following are discussed in the passage except ______.
(A) the resignation of some YES administrators
(B) bad press resulting from financial improprieties
(C) lawsuits against YES
(D) the YES program’s stated goals
(E) current levels of YES funding



4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program



VeritasKarishma why in question 1 option A is wrong ?
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Hello VeritasKarishma ma'am!

Thanks for explaining "primary purpose". Going with meaning of purpose, why author intended to write the whole passage. Here reason is to suggest a way to improve program. Suggestion is given in half of the last paragraph. I agree with this but I have a little doubt then what is difference among main point, primary purpose and best title of the passage.

I think option C for Q4 would be more suitable if C were written like- to suggest a way to improve program which is facing multiple challenges.
Two paragraphs are written about challenges and criticism. First paragraph introduce the program which is facing challenges.

For Q1, when we were asked about the title of the passage, option E is perfect. It is using all keywords covering the whole passage.

So it would be great if you could clear the doubt how I can distinguish the main point, title, and purpose of a passage.


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Young Enterprise Services (YES) is a federal program created to encourage entrepreneurship in 14- to 18-year-olds who have already shown a clear aptitude for starting business ventures. The program, started in 2002, has provided loans, grants, and counseling—in the form of workshops and individual meetings with established entrepreneurs—to over 7500 young people. The future of YES, however, is now in jeopardy. A number of damaging criticisms have been leveled at the program, and members of the congressional agency that provides the funding have suggested that YES may be scaled down or even dismantled entirely.

One complaint is that the funds that YES distributes have disproportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families, despite the program’s stated goal of being blind to any criteria besides merit. Though no one has claimed that any of the recipients of YES funds have been undeserving, several families have brought lawsuits claiming that their requests for funding were rejected because of the families’ relatively high levels of income. The resulting publicity was an embarrassment to the YES administrators, one of whom resigned.

Another challenge has been the admittedly difficult task of ensuring that a young person, not his or her family, is truly the driving force behind a venture. The rules state that the business plan must be created by the youth, and that any profits in excess of $1,000 be placed in an escrow account that can only be used for education, investment in the venture, and little else, for a period that is determined by the age of the recipient. Despite this, several grants had to be returned after it was discovered that parents—or in one case, a neighbor—were misusing YES funds to promote their own business ideas. To make matters worse, the story of the returned monies was at first denied by a YES spokesperson who then had to retract the denial, leading to more bad press.

In truth, YES has had some real success stories. A 14-year-old girl in Texas used the knowledge and funding she received through the program to connect with a distributor who now carries her line of custom-designed cell phone covers. Two brothers in Alaska have developed an online travel advisory service for young people vacationing with their families. Both of these ventures are profitable, and both companies have gained a striking amount of brand recognition in a very short time. However, YES has been pitifully lax in trumpeting these encouraging stories. Local press notwithstanding, these and other successes have received little media coverage. This is a shame, but one that can be remedied. The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program’s own publications: “No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”

1. Which of the following would be the most appropriate title for this passage?
(A) “Recent Difficulties in the YES Program”
(B) “Federal Entrepreneurship Programs for Young Adults”
(C) “Successes of the YES Program”
(D) “Common Challenges Facing Federal Programs”
(E) “The YES Program: How to Overcome Recent Challenges”


2. The author of the passage would most likely describe YES as a _______.
(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair
(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors
(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility
(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged
(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding


3.3. All of the following are discussed in the passage except ______.
(A) the resignation of some YES administrators
(B) bad press resulting from financial improprieties
(C) lawsuits against YES
(D) the YES program’s stated goals
(E) current levels of YES funding



4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program




The answer to question no. 4 is indeed (C). When we say "primary purpose" would be the one that covers the entire passage, we are giving you one way of recognising the primary purpose. What role does the conclusion play in an argument? It is what gives the opinion of the author. It is the reason the author writes the argument.
The primary purpose has exactly the same role in an RC passage - it is the reason the author writes the passage.

The author introduces the program, gives the issues it is facing, talks abt the success stories and how the program has not capitalised on them. And then he closes with an advice to the program. This is the purpose of writing the entire passage.
Even though in a large part of the passage he details the problems being faced, was his intention just to point out the problems? No, he wanted to give advice on how to improve the program. That is the point he wants to make.
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Young Enterprise Services (YES) is a federal program created to encourage entrepreneurship in 14- to 18-year-olds who have already shown a clear aptitude for starting business ventures. The program, started in 2002, has provided loans, grants, and counseling—in the form of workshops and individual meetings with established entrepreneurs—to over 7500 young people. The future of YES, however, is now in jeopardy. A number of damaging criticisms have been leveled at the program, and members of the congressional agency that provides the funding have suggested that YES may be scaled down or even dismantled entirely.

One complaint is that the funds that YES distributes have disproportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families, despite the program’s stated goal of being blind to any criteria besides merit. Though no one has claimed that any of the recipients of YES funds have been undeserving, several families have brought lawsuits claiming that their requests for funding were rejected because of the families’ relatively high levels of income. The resulting publicity was an embarrassment to the YES administrators, one of whom resigned.

Another challenge has been the admittedly difficult task of ensuring that a young person, not his or her family, is truly the driving force behind a venture. The rules state that the business plan must be created by the youth, and that any profits in excess of $1,000 be placed in an escrow account that can only be used for education, investment in the venture, and little else, for a period that is determined by the age of the recipient. Despite this, several grants had to be returned after it was discovered that parents—or in one case, a neighbor—were misusing YES funds to promote their own business ideas. To make matters worse, the story of the returned monies was at first denied by a YES spokesperson who then had to retract the denial, leading to more bad press.

In truth, YES has had some real success stories. A 14-year-old girl in Texas used the knowledge and funding she received through the program to connect with a distributor who now carries her line of custom-designed cell phone covers. Two brothers in Alaska have developed an online travel advisory service for young people vacationing with their families. Both of these ventures are profitable, and both companies have gained a striking amount of brand recognition in a very short time. However, YES has been pitifully lax in trumpeting these encouraging stories. Local press notwithstanding, these and other successes have received little media coverage. This is a shame, but one that can be remedied. The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program’s own publications: “No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”

1. Which of the following would be the most appropriate title for this passage?
(A) “Recent Difficulties in the YES Program”
(B) “Federal Entrepreneurship Programs for Young Adults”
(C) “Successes of the YES Program”
(D) “Common Challenges Facing Federal Programs”
(E) “The YES Program: How to Overcome Recent Challenges”


2. The author of the passage would most likely describe YES as a _______.
(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair
(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors
(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility
(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged
(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding


3.3. All of the following are discussed in the passage except ______.
(A) the resignation of some YES administrators
(B) bad press resulting from financial improprieties
(C) lawsuits against YES
(D) the YES program’s stated goals
(E) current levels of YES funding



4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program



VeritasKarishma why in question 1 option A is wrong ?

(A) is not 'wrong' but what you are looking for is the most appropriate and that is (E).
The challenges are discussed and how to overcome them is presented. So the author's intent was to say what the YES program should do to overcome the challenges they are facing.
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Hello VeritasKarishma ma'am!

Thanks for explaining "primary purpose". Going with meaning of purpose, why author intended to write the whole passage. Here reason is to suggest a way to improve program. Suggestion is given in half of the last paragraph. I agree with this but I have a little doubt then what is difference among main point, primary purpose and best title of the passage.

I think option C for Q4 would be more suitable if C were written like- to suggest a way to improve program which is facing multiple challenges.
Two paragraphs are written about challenges and criticism. First paragraph introduce the program which is facing challenges.

For Q1, when we were asked about the title of the passage, option E is perfect. It is using all keywords covering the whole passage.

So it would be great if you could clear the doubt how I can distinguish the main point, title, and purpose of a passage.


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Young Enterprise Services (YES) is a federal program created to encourage entrepreneurship in 14- to 18-year-olds who have already shown a clear aptitude for starting business ventures. The program, started in 2002, has provided loans, grants, and counseling—in the form of workshops and individual meetings with established entrepreneurs—to over 7500 young people. The future of YES, however, is now in jeopardy. A number of damaging criticisms have been leveled at the program, and members of the congressional agency that provides the funding have suggested that YES may be scaled down or even dismantled entirely.

One complaint is that the funds that YES distributes have disproportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families, despite the program’s stated goal of being blind to any criteria besides merit. Though no one has claimed that any of the recipients of YES funds have been undeserving, several families have brought lawsuits claiming that their requests for funding were rejected because of the families’ relatively high levels of income. The resulting publicity was an embarrassment to the YES administrators, one of whom resigned.

Another challenge has been the admittedly difficult task of ensuring that a young person, not his or her family, is truly the driving force behind a venture. The rules state that the business plan must be created by the youth, and that any profits in excess of $1,000 be placed in an escrow account that can only be used for education, investment in the venture, and little else, for a period that is determined by the age of the recipient. Despite this, several grants had to be returned after it was discovered that parents—or in one case, a neighbor—were misusing YES funds to promote their own business ideas. To make matters worse, the story of the returned monies was at first denied by a YES spokesperson who then had to retract the denial, leading to more bad press.

In truth, YES has had some real success stories. A 14-year-old girl in Texas used the knowledge and funding she received through the program to connect with a distributor who now carries her line of custom-designed cell phone covers. Two brothers in Alaska have developed an online travel advisory service for young people vacationing with their families. Both of these ventures are profitable, and both companies have gained a striking amount of brand recognition in a very short time. However, YES has been pitifully lax in trumpeting these encouraging stories. Local press notwithstanding, these and other successes have received little media coverage. This is a shame, but one that can be remedied. The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program’s own publications: “No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.”

1. Which of the following would be the most appropriate title for this passage?
(A) “Recent Difficulties in the YES Program”
(B) “Federal Entrepreneurship Programs for Young Adults”
(C) “Successes of the YES Program”
(D) “Common Challenges Facing Federal Programs”
(E) “The YES Program: How to Overcome Recent Challenges”


2. The author of the passage would most likely describe YES as a _______.
(A) failed enterprise that is beyond repair
(B) noble effort that has been hampered by external factors
(C) limited success that can be improved through greater fiscal responsibility
(D) potentially worthy program that has been mismanaged
(E) waste of public resources that should never have received funding


3.3. All of the following are discussed in the passage except ______.
(A) the resignation of some YES administrators
(B) bad press resulting from financial improprieties
(C) lawsuits against YES
(D) the YES program’s stated goals
(E) current levels of YES funding



4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program




The answer to question no. 4 is indeed (C). When we say "primary purpose" would be the one that covers the entire passage, we are giving you one way of recognising the primary purpose. What role does the conclusion play in an argument? It is what gives the opinion of the author. It is the reason the author writes the argument.
The primary purpose has exactly the same role in an RC passage - it is the reason the author writes the passage.

The author introduces the program, gives the issues it is facing, talks abt the success stories and how the program has not capitalised on them. And then he closes with an advice to the program. This is the purpose of writing the entire passage.
Even though in a large part of the passage he details the problems being faced, was his intention just to point out the problems? No, he wanted to give advice on how to improve the program. That is the point he wants to make.

Main point, purpose and title are all the same. They are the reason the author writes the argument. Before he can give you how to resolve the issues, he needs to tell you what the issues are. He needs to explain you the situation so that you understand what he is proposing. That is how he can make you buy in to his idea.

If you, as an expert, want to make a case that company XYZ should sell off the pharma division, you will first talk about the issues pharma division is creating for XYZ, then why they cannot be resolved by XYZ and then why getting rid of it will work in XYZ's favour.
Your main point, purpose and title stay the same - XYZ should get rid of pharma division.
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4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
is the way an appropriate word here? The word “way” is something like “method”, but there is no ‘method’ discussed in this passage, I guess!
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4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
is the way an appropriate word here? The word “way” is something like “method”, but there is no ‘method’ discussed in this passage, I guess!

The last paragraph gives a way to make the program successful - "active approach to public relations".

The author wrote the passage to make this point - YES needs an active approach to public relations (media coverage etc).

Also, for those who are still wondering why the main point covers just the last paragraph, think about a CR argument. The conclusion is just one sentence (or sometimes not even explicitly mentioned) while the rest of the paragraph is supporting evidence. Still, we are able to figure out the main point since it is the reason the author picked up the pen.
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4. The primary purpose of the passage is to ______.
(A) detail the approach that should be taken in remedying YES’s public relations problems
(B) defend YES from the various criticisms that have been leveled against it
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
(D) detail several criticisms and problems of the YES program
(E) make that case that YES, despite some difficulties, has been quite successful for
some people who have taken part in the program
(C) suggest a way to improve the program
is the way an appropriate word here? The word “way” is something like “method”, but there is no ‘method’ discussed in this passage, I guess!

The last paragraph gives a way to make the program successful - "active approach to public relations".

The author wrote the passage to make this point - YES needs an active approach to public relations (media coverage etc).

Also, for those who are still wondering why the main point covers just the last paragraph, think about a CR argument. The conclusion is just one sentence (or sometimes not even explicitly mentioned) while the rest of the paragraph is supporting evidence. Still, we are able to figure out the main point since it is the reason the author picked up the pen.
Thank you very much..
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@vertiaskarishma I still have confusion regarding the wordings of the answer choice for q4. While I see why it can be considered best of the choices, It still uses "improve the program". The author does not provide any suggestion to improve the program in itself but suggests to use an approach to better market the program. That might or might not improve the program. Aren't these two diff things?
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hey,

Could you please explain where did I go wrong for 1 and 4? My line of reasoning is explained below:

For Question 1,

Let me summarize the para

Para 1,What is YES, and Author shows concern about the future of YES is uncertain.

Para2, Complaint one, Regarding the funding of the business idea. Its being YES distributes have dis proportionally gone to young people from economically disadvantaged families. But there is no such substantive claim.

Pata2,another complaint/challenges , misusing of fund by elder people.

Para 3, Positive outcome of YES, Two success stories are mentioned and due to poor media action , there was little media coverage.
and author advice the administrator given in one of the program???s own publications.

Now coming to the option E, where does the author mentions How to overcome the recent challenges,
The only line which the author has advice was the last line of the final paragraph, see below.

"The administrators of YES should heed the advice given in one of the program???s own publications: ???No business venture, whatever its appeal, will succeed for long without an active approach to public relations.???

and in all the other para only complaint & challenges were discuss. No where any solution or advice is mentioned.

So , merely with line highlighted above , we cant say such statement that author has mentioned How to overcome recent challenges?

and similar line of reasoning is application for Question 4, option C, although option E is also not a good option. Still Option C is also not the best among the other options.
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Hey,

could someone answer Nitinaka19 post? I have the same doubts
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