Project SC Butler: Day 102 Sentence Correction (SC1)
Taiwanese eat a cuisine unique to the island's history; Taiwan's cuisine is basically Chinese
to which has been added Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences.
A) to which
has been added Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch
influencesB) added to which
is Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch
influencesC) to which Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences have been added
D) with Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences
having been added
E)
and, in addition, Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences have been added
OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONMy textual insertions, edits, and annotations are in blue typeface
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Option AThe verb in the underlined portion is
has been added and its subject is
influences.
Since
influences is plural and
has been added is singular,
the subject and verb are not in agreement.
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Option B has a similar problem. The plural subject influences does not agree with the singular verb is.Eliminate A and B.
• Choice C correctly conjugates
the verb; option C changes has been added to
have been added• Choice D changes the perfect passive verb
has been added to a past, passive participle
having been added, so D can be eliminated.
• Choice E features redundancy with the words
and and
in addition.
Eliminate E. The correct answer is C.
ANALYSIS• Understand meaning, but focus on the second independent clause
Unless it is delineating an otherwise confusing list, a semicolon must come between two complete independent clauses (ICs) (sentences).
-- We can get the meaning from both ICs.
Meaning: The island of Taiwan has a unique history that is reflected in the cuisine that Taiwanese people eat.
Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences have been added to what is basically Chinese cuisine.
You may not need to rearrange the sentence in order to figure out the subject and verb at issue.
If you cannot figure out what the subject and verb are, try rearranging the sentence.
-- focus on the second IC
Taiwan's cuisine is basically Chinese
to which has been added Polynesian, Portuguese, and even Dutch influences.
The "to which" construction can get confusing.
"to which" refers to the item already mentioned: Chinese cuisine.
to which =
cuisine that is basically Chinese"has been added"?
Find the subject.-- Chinese cuisine has not been added to itself
-- What got added to Chinese cuisine?
-- All that remains is adjective, adjective, and even adjective NOUN
-- The subject is the noun
influences.Structure
-- Subj: A, B, and even C influences
-- Verb: ___ been added TO
-- Object of verb: cuisine
-- Adjective that describes the object: "basically Chinese" = cuisine that is basically Chinese
Rewrite: A, B, and even C
influences ___ been added to cuisine that is basically Chinese
• Issues
Split #1: S/V agreementInfluences is plural. Options A and B incorrectly use singular verbs.
Option A uses influences . . .
has been added
Option B uses influences . . .
is added
Eliminate A and B
Split #2: No working verbOption D creates a fragment or run-on sentence. It has no working verb in the clause at issue.
A, B, and even C influences . . .
having been added to cuisine that is basically Chinese.
A verbING is not a working verb.
Eliminate option D
Split #3: RedundancyOption E uses redundant words:
and, and
in additionEliminate E.
C is correct.
Check using the rewrite
Rewrite: A, B, and even C influences have been added to cuisine that is basically Chinese (or . . . to basically Chinese cuisine).
COMMENTSgvvsnraju
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