Hello
GMATNinja,
This is regarding option E
(E) They will either scale back their orders to pre-2003 levels, or they will stop doing business with us altogether dependent on whether the changes their management has proposed will be fully implemented, or not.
This describes an 'either X or Y' structure, where X and Y should be parallel.
X--> scale (verb)
Y--> they (pronoun)
X and Y are clearly not parallel, and hence is the reason for elimination?
What if option E changes to
(E)
They will either scale back their orders to pre-2003 levels, or stop doing business with us altogether dependent on whether the changes their management has proposed will be fully implemented, or not.
Here 'They will' is taken away as common from the 'either X or Y' structure. Would this choice be correct then?
Please suggest if I am missing something in option E.
Thank you in advance!