Ritwickhota wrote:
Hi
EMPOWERgmatVerbal could you please share your breakdown of this solution?
To be more specific, stating below the reasons for my POE, despite arriving at B. (option B also confused me, fyi)
(A) "they" reference is ambiguous and can refer back to livestock fed on grains wild animals -
eliminated (B) "Wild animals have less total fat than livestock.." - Here I keep thinking that the wild animals' fat is being compared to the livestock.
Where am I going wrong?(C) The first part seemed correct to me (felt "than that of" referred to the fat of livestock) but the second part, "kind of fat thought to be" seemed wordy - eliminated.
(D) Clear comparison issue of fat with livestock -
eliminated(E) The use of "their" and "they" is ambiguous -
eliminatedThanks in advance!
Hi Ritwickhota,
Your elimination process is largely spot-on. Let's take a closer look at the specific issues you raised regarding options (B) and (C):
(B) wild animals have less total fat than livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be
The confusion you're facing with this option is quite common when dealing with comparative structures. You're seeing "wild animals have less total fat than livestock..." and it seems like it's comparing "the wild animals' fat" to "livestock". But let's zoom out for a second. The sentence isn't trying to compare 'fat' with 'livestock', rather it's comparing the properties of two different groups, namely, wild animals and livestock fed on grain. So, if we put it in simpler terms, the sentence is saying: Wild animals have less of Property X and more of Property Y when compared to livestock fed on grain. The sentence structure is absolutely fine here. We're dealing with an elliptical comparison (a form where some words are omitted but understood). The implied comparison is: "wild animals have less total fat than [what] livestock fed on grain [have]."
(C) wild animals have less total fat than that of livestock fed on grain and have more fat of a kind thought to be
Your intuition on this option is correct. It starts off with a faulty comparison. The sentence compares "wild animals" to "that of livestock fed on grain". The pronoun "that" is unclear - does it refer to livestock, grain, or something else? Also, "kind of fat thought to be" might sound wordy, but it's more of a passive construction and in itself doesn't disqualify an option.
Therefore, your process of elimination is sound, and (B) is indeed the correct answer. It's an example of a tricky comparison issue that the GMAT might throw at you. But now that you've seen it here and understood the mechanism, you'll be better equipped to deal with such questions on the test.
And here's the permalink to the full breakdown as well:
https://gmatclub.com/forum/according-to ... l#p2247520Keep at it!