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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures -- such isn't needed

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures--> corrrect

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates -- them who?

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures -- such as is used to give examples. INCORRECT

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures - Only one which clearly conveys that the dissolved oxygen is what is making the zone inhabitable. CORRECT

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- twilight zone that... that... INCORRECT

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates -- antecedent for them is ambiguous - INCORRECT

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- the sentence wants to convey that the zone is inhabitable because of low levels of oxygen. This option doesn't show the cause and effect. INCORRECT
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I would also go with Option D.

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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures -- such as is used to give examples. INCORRECT

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures - Only one which clearly conveys that the dissolved oxygen is what is making the zone inhabitable. CORRECT

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- twilight zone that... that... INCORRECT

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates -- antecedent for them is ambiguous - INCORRECT

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- the sentence wants to convey that the zone is inhabitable because of low levels of oxygen. This option doesn't show the cause and effect. INCORRECT

Here, Option B changes the intended meaning of the sentence. We need it to point to the Twilight Zone.
Pronoun 'THEM' in Option D is not ambiguous. It is referring to the Twilight Zone which is uninhabitable.
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I would also go with Option D.

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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures -- such as is used to give examples. INCORRECT

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures - Only one which clearly conveys that the dissolved oxygen is what is making the zone inhabitable. CORRECT

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- twilight zone that... that... INCORRECT

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates -- antecedent for them is ambiguous - INCORRECT

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures -- the sentence wants to convey that the zone is inhabitable because of low levels of oxygen. This option doesn't show the cause and effect. INCORRECT

Here, Option B changes the intended meaning of the sentence. We need it to point to the Twilight Zone.
Pronoun 'THEM' in Option D is not ambiguous. It is referring to the Twilight Zone which is uninhabitable.

Twilight zone is singular. Them cannot refer to it.
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Hey, this is my first time posting here in SC butler, experts please correct me if I am wrong.

The original statement incorrectly uses "such as to be.. ". Thus we move further with other answer choices.

Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures. Wrong- As mentioned above, the use of "such as" is incorrect out here.

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures Correct - The use of "such that it" makes logical sense and connects the sentence well. The "it" refers to singular subject "twilight zone".

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures Wrong- It illogically implies that the "dissolved oxygen" cannot be inhabited.

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates. Wrong - "them" in the sentences concedes a pronoun ambiguity error. The subject is singular "twilight zone"

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures. Wrong- I think this a good deception as the parallelism works well."that contains extremely low levels of ...and that cannot be inhabited". Nice. But wait, the meaning is all distorted with this option. The original sentence seems to draw a cause and effect relationship. Because the levels of oxygen are low, the twilight zone cannot be inhabited by other sea creature. The use of "perfect parallelism" here distorts the meaning of the sentence and presents the two as two separate facts. Hence this option is out.


Our answer is B
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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.
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Subject - Verb
      Found in the depths of all the world's oceans,
    the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone
      that( twilight zone) contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen
        such that it( twilight zone) is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures.

Issues:
    The term 'such as' is used to elicit examples.
    A Incorrect usage of the term 'such as'

Answer choice analysis:
    A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures
      Incorrect usage of the term 'such as'

    B) such that it( twilight zone) is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures
      X such that Y: This expression is used to signify the extent of an activity/deed.
      Ex:
        The Shaolin Ninjas are enormously swift and adept such that their movements are easy to miss for a common man.
      B is the winner!

    C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
      Meaning issue: that ---maps to---> oxygen/extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen.
      Oxygen CANNOT be inhabited by most other sea creatures

    D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates
      Meaning issue: making them ---maps to---> oxygen/extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen.
      Oxygen is making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates

    E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
      Grammatically correct and parallel. Now, it became interesting!
      However, it LACKS the cause-effect scenario as intended in the original sentence.
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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures - difficult and strange

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures - it = twilight zone - correct answer

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures - modifies oxygen - wrong

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates - them is wrong

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures- strange meaning - wrong
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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures ——> such as is used to present examples, not the case here, so eliminate A.

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures— the sentence refers to the the twilight zone, which is uninhabitable for some reason. The only possible antecedent for it could be the twilight zone. Hold B for now.

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures ——> that refers to oxygen

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates —— > them has problems with pronoun agreement, even if we assume it referred to the logically correct twilight zone in question.

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
Same as C

B seems to be the best option here. Winner by POE!

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Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures
B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures
C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates
E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures

A) "such as to be" unidiomatic and "such as" is used to introduce examples… which is not the case; also, unpara.
B) "such that it is" what is "it" ref to, "the squid" or "the zone", ambig; also, unpara.
C) "cannot be inhabited" unintended meaning; "that" ref to "…oxygen" also unintended; also, unpara.
D) "them" is plural, "zone" is singular, sva; also, unpara.

Answer (E): "zone that contains… and [zone] that cannot be…".
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IMO correct answer is B

Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures - "Such as" is generally used to introduce examples & going by the meaning of the sentence, usage of "such as" is incorrect here. - Discard

B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures - This option is correct - "it" is having clear antecedent as "low levels of dissolved oxygen" & this option fits perfectly with the context of the sentence.

C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures - with restrictive clauses, we use "that", now the clear meaning issue in this sentence is that here "that" is referring back to "dissolved oxygen....that cannot be inhabited..." this is not true - Incorrect

D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creates - "them" as a plural pronoun does not fits with singular subject "twilight zone" - Incorrect

E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures - Causation is not properly portrayed here; the low level of oxygen is what causes the twilight zone uninhabitable - These are not parallel activities, so parallelism though maintained this cannot be our answer for sure - Incorrect
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OA is E, is it doubtful? where is the official explanation?
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This question can be tricky if not approached with attention to detail. I'll attempt to explain why.

Sentence: Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures.

Meaning: The vampire squid lives in a part of the ocean called the twilight zone. This zone contains very low levels of oxygen, and cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures. This part can be confusing to interpret since a lot of us also consider a case where the twilight zone cannot be inhabited only and only due to the low levels of oxygen, bringing in a cause and effect relationship. However, there are only two things that the sentence wants to convey:

1. The twilight zone contains extremely low levels of oxygen
2. The twilight zone cannot be inhabited by most sea creatures.

Let's get into the options.

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A) such as to be uninhabitable by most other sea creatures
Incorrect. The usage here is incorrect because we know that we can only use 'such as to' when the main clause and the subordinate clause are the same. Since it distorts the meaning, we can safely eliminate A.

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B) such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures
Incorrect. This option looks perfect at first because it seems to convey a cause an effect relationship between the twilight zone having low levels of dissolved oxygen, and that being the reason why it cannot be inhabited by sea creatures, making it the perfect trap answer. Two considerations:

1. The sentence wants to tell us two things about the twilight zone, as mentioned earlier. It does not mean that because the twilight zone has low levels of oxygen, it cannot be inhabited by other creatures.
2. The usage of uninhabitable to in this context is wrong. The usage of the preposition after uninhabitable depends on whether the subject in question is singular or plural.

Example 1: Parts of the Persian Gulf are uninhabitable to natives
Example 2: The twilight zone is uninhabitable for most sea creatures

Also, what exactly does 'it' refer to? The squid? The twilight zone? The oxygen? Too ambiguous.

For these reasons, B can be eliminated.

Quote:
C) that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
Incorrect. The lack of a conjunction at the beginning makes it seem like the low levels of dissolved oxygen cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures. C can be eliminated too.

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D) making them uninhabitable to most other sea creatures
Incorrect. The twilight zone is a singular subject, and the use of 'them' here clashes with that. This option has a lot more wrong with it than right, so we can eliminate D.

Quote:
E) and that cannot be inhabited by most other sea creatures
CORRECT. Bingo! At last, a sentence that has no ambiguity, and conveys the intended meaning of the sentence in a crisp and correct manner. The conjunction 'and' here is really important, as it separates the two things that we discussed above. The usage of 'that' here also brings in an element of parallelism.

Option E is our answer.

Hope it helps.

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I have posted the official explanation HERE
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I was deciding between B and E and I went with B.

The original prompt seems to say that it is due to the oxygen that the twilight zone is uninhabitable. The same idea is represented in B. Whereas in E, the twilight zone has oxygen and is uninhabitable.

How should I know that the intended meaning is the one in E?
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I was deciding between B and E and I went with B.

The original prompt seems to say that it is due to the oxygen that the twilight zone is uninhabitable. The same idea is represented in B. Whereas in E, the twilight zone has oxygen and is uninhabitable.

How should I know that the intended meaning is the one in E?
Xin Cho , are you confused by the OE (HERE)? (That question is bolded because the upcoming quotation bubbles often obscure text.)

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(B) Found in the depths of all the world's oceans, the vampire squid lives in a twilight zone that contains extremely low levels of dissolved oxygen such that it is uninhabitable to most other sea creatures.
• in general, be very wary of such that if the words are together
I cannot find one official SC question in which "such that" (with nothing between the two words) is correct.
Not one. (I am happy to stand corrected.)

In the footnote you will find six official questions with at least one option that uses "such that."

These six are among the very few I have found that test "such that" at all. (I think I have seen eight official questions with such that in the answer choices.)
• you will see such that frequently in Quant. Quant is not SC.
• this phrase is commonly used. It is written all over the forum. As far as I can tell after scouring official questions :dazed , it is not used in SC on the GMAT.
• the typical correct construction is [SUCH + adjective + noun + THAT] or [SUCH + noun + THAT]
-- He was such a grouchy professor that he intimidated students.
-- The conversation was such a delight that I did not want it to end.
• uninhabitable to? Not great


** OFFICIAL QUESTIONS IN WHICH "SUCH THAT" is INCORRECT. I cannot find ANY official questions in which this phrasing is correct.
SPOILER ALERT: If you click on these links to official questions, you will know at least one incorrect answer and perhaps two.
OFFICIAL QUESTIONS in which such that is an option but not the correct answer.
HERE, #1

HERE, #2

HERE, #3

HERE, #4

HERE, #5

[u]HERE, #6
Furthermore, option A does not determine the meaning of the sentence.

Is something about the OE not clear? Do you have a question about this issue? If so, please ask that question. I will be happy to try to help.
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Option B uses "such that." As I noted in my OE (HERE) and in my reply to you (HERE,) I cannot find any official question whose correct answer contains the phrase "such that" (with the words placed right next to each other).

I came to that conclusion after scouring hundreds of official questions.

Ron Purewal, formerly of Manhattan Prep, drew a similar conclusion. He wrote
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You can find that sentence in this post, HERE.

Hope that helps.
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Thank you very much for the reply generis...

...and my apologies for the dumb question. I was always of the opinion that the original prompt (that would be the "A") determines the intended meaning. If I am given two possible answers with difference only in the meaning, how will I be able to determine the intended meaning?
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