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Dear zoezhuyan

I'm happy to respond. :-)

Let's work from the inside out. The word "why" is a relative adjective. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) because it's an adjective, it's never the subject of the clause
Here's the diagram of that part:
China's = possessive, modifies noun "moves"
overly = adverb, modifies "cautious"
cautious = adjective, modifies noun "moves"
moves = noun, plural, subject of clause
to encourage FDI = infinitive phrase, modifies noun "moves"
disappoint = plural verb, main verb of clause
The subject, "moves," is plural, and the verb, "disappoint," is also plural.
This entire clause is a substantive clause, a clause that takes the place of a noun.

The word "which" is a relative pronoun. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) it always plays a noun-role in the clause: subject, direct object, or object of a preposition
Here it is the subject.
. . . which is why . . .
Here, "which" is the subject of the clause, "is" is the verb, and the "why"-clause takes the role of what is called the predicate nominative. In the sentence "P is Q," the role of Q is called the predicate nominative.

You are 100% correct: this sentence does one thing that always would be considered incorrect on the GMAT. It uses the word "which" to refer to the action of the verb in the main clause, the verb "delivers." This would never be correct on the GMAT, but in real spoken English, this often passes as correct. Apparently, it's correct enough for the Economist magazine. Please understand that the grammar standards of the GMAT are very high, and few writers outside of academia adhere to such standards. In particular, any publication that depends on its readership for money cannot afford the luxury of such high grammatical standards.

Does all this make sense?

Have a good day, my friend.
Mike :-)

Hi mikemcgarry, glad to get your response
and thanks for your patient and crystal explanation.

wow... GMAT grammar is high standard than others, such as the Economist.
I hope I won't be confused with GMAT grammar and the Economist grammar.

although I do not read Economist recently as frequency as last few month, I met a problem of sentences from the Economist today, hoping your explanation again

They did not know it, but when a group of merchants raised money for the Boston Pier in 1772, they were early pioneer of a vehicle known today as a REIT ( real -estate investment trust). The financing structure for the pier -- the merchants owned the land together and shared the rent -- in essence describes an investment product that, 250 years on, is all the rage.

1/ it
actually, I have no idea about the it, but I think I can easily understand if "it" is replaced with "that", i am not sure whether intended meaning will be change under the replacement.

2/ but
a little hard to understand that what is the function of but here.

3/ 250 years on,
this is first time to read it. I read XXX years later, after XXX years. Would you please clarify XXX years on,

thanks a lot

have a nice day.

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Dear zoezhuyan

I'm happy to respond. :-)

Let's work from the inside out. The word "why" is a relative adjective. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) because it's an adjective, it's never the subject of the clause
Here's the diagram of that part:
China's = possessive, modifies noun "moves"
overly = adverb, modifies "cautious"
cautious = adjective, modifies noun "moves"
moves = noun, plural, subject of clause
to encourage FDI = infinitive phrase, modifies noun "moves"
disappoint = plural verb, main verb of clause
The subject, "moves," is plural, and the verb, "disappoint," is also plural.
This entire clause is a substantive clause, a clause that takes the place of a noun.

The word "which" is a relative pronoun. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) it always plays a noun-role in the clause: subject, direct object, or object of a preposition
Here it is the subject.
. . . which is why . . .
Here, "which" is the subject of the clause, "is" is the verb, and the "why"-clause takes the role of what is called the predicate nominative. In the sentence "P is Q," the role of Q is called the predicate nominative.

You are 100% correct: this sentence does one thing that always would be considered incorrect on the GMAT. It uses the word "which" to refer to the action of the verb in the main clause, the verb "delivers." This would never be correct on the GMAT, but in real spoken English, this often passes as correct. Apparently, it's correct enough for the Economist magazine. Please understand that the grammar standards of the GMAT are very high, and few writers outside of academia adhere to such standards. In particular, any publication that depends on its readership for money cannot afford the luxury of such high grammatical standards.

Does all this make sense?

Have a good day, my friend.
Mike :-)

Hi mikemcgarry, glad to get your response
and thanks for your patient and crystal explanation.

wow... GMAT grammar is high standard than others, such as the Economist.
I hope I won't be confused with GMAT grammar and the Economist grammar.

although I do not read Economist recently as frequency as last few month, I met a problem of sentences from the Economist today, hoping your explanation again

They did not know it, but when a group of merchants raised money for the Boston Pier in 1772, they were early pioneer of a vehicle known today as a REIT ( real -estate investment trust). The financing structure for the pier -- the merchants owned the land together and shared the rent -- in essence describes an investment product that, 250 years on, is all the rage.

1/ it
actually, I have no idea about the it, but I think I can easily understand if "it" is replaced with "that", i am not sure whether intended meaning will be change under the replacement.

2/ but
a little hard to understand that what is the function of but here.

3/ 250 years on,
this is first time to read it. I read XXX years later, after XXX years. Would you please clarify XXX years on,

thanks a lot

have a nice day.

>_~
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I read a sentence from the Economist, I am confused by the word "for", it will be grateful if you can help

In response, a market is springing up: for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring
I have no idea about the use of "for", although I looked up the dictionary
what's the difference between the following 2 sentences
In response, a market is springing up: for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring
In response, a market is springing up:
for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring


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Dear friends / or experts
I read a sentence from the Economist, I am confused by the word "for", it will be grateful if you can help

In response, a market is springing up: for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring
I have no idea about the use of "for", although I looked up the dictionary
what's the difference between the following 2 sentences
In response, a market is springing up: for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring
In response, a market is springing up:
for "regtech", fintech's nerdy new offspring


Thanks in advance

have a nice day
>_~
Dear zoezhuyan,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

The Economist magazine is usually exceptional in its writing, but this sentence is casual and sloppy. In a way, it is highly theatrical writing. Do not worry about this structure: it absolutely is a structure you will NOT see on the GMAT.

Does this make sense?
Mike :-)
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Hi experts,
I read a sentence from Economist, unfortunately, I found I cannot figure the core of which - clause, please help
Foreign direct investment delivers competition, technology, management know-how and jobs, which is why China's overly cautious moves to encourage FDI disappoint.


my doubts:
1/
here, which- clause refers to the action of preceding sentence, Foreign direct investment delivers competition, technology, management know-how and jobs, right?
On GMAT, which - clause NEVER refers to the action of preceding sentence ?

2/
in which-clause, which is the subject, is is the verb, and a why- clause following the verb.

3/
in why - clause, why China's overly cautious moves to encourage FDI disappoint.
if China's overly cautious moves is a subject , I cannot figure out verb.
if moves is a singular verb, can China's overly cautious be a subject ? IMO, cautious is purely an adjective, which can not be a subject.

Please help..

thanks a lot
have a nice day
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Dear zoezhuyan

I'm happy to respond. :-)

Let's work from the inside out. The word "why" is a relative adjective. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) because it's an adjective, it's never the subject of the clause
Here's the diagram of that part:
China's = possessive, modifies noun "moves"
overly = adverb, modifies "cautious"
cautious = adjective, modifies noun "moves"
moves = noun, plural, subject of clause
to encourage FDI = infinitive phrase, modifies noun "moves"
disappoint = plural verb, main verb of clause
The subject, "moves," is plural, and the verb, "disappoint," is also plural.
This entire clause is a substantive clause, a clause that takes the place of a noun.

The word "which" is a relative pronoun. This means
(a) it begins a subordinate clause
(b) it always plays a noun-role in the clause: subject, direct object, or object of a preposition
Here it is the subject.
. . . which is why . . .
Here, "which" is the subject of the clause, "is" is the verb, and the "why"-clause takes the role of what is called the predicate nominative. In the sentence "P is Q," the role of Q is called the predicate nominative.

You are 100% correct: this sentence does one thing that always would be considered incorrect on the GMAT. It uses the word "which" to refer to the action of the verb in the main clause, the verb "delivers." This would never be correct on the GMAT, but in real spoken English, this often passes as correct. Apparently, it's correct enough for the Economist magazine. Please understand that the grammar standards of the GMAT are very high, and few writers outside of academia adhere to such standards. In particular, any publication that depends on its readership for money cannot afford the luxury of such high grammatical standards.

Does all this make sense?

Have a good day, my friend.
Mike :-)

mikemcgarry, Could you share the correct version of the sentence?
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Hi experts,
I read a sentence from Economist, unfortunately, I found I cannot figure the core of which - clause, please help

Foreign direct investment delivers competition, technology, management know-how and jobs, which is why China's overly cautious moves to encourage FDI disappoint.
mikemcgarry, Could you share the correct version of the sentence?
Dear ziyuenlau,

My friend, there are a few ways we might state this information in a form acceptable on the GMAT. For example

1) Foreign direct investment delivers competition, technology, management know-how, and jobs, and China's overly cautious moves to encourage foreign direct investment, in failing to advance on these fronts, ultimately have been disappointing.

2) Foreign direct investment stimulates competition, technological growth, advancement in management skills, and job growth; China would like to encourage more foreign direct investment in its economy, but ironically, the constraints on these four factors in China's state-run economy are such that its overly cautious moves have not met a warm reception.

#1 still retains some of the catching journalistic language, but #2 is very close to what the GMAT might say.

Does that make sense?
Mike :-)