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Option B, C, D, & E are incorrect due to modifier error. The correct noun that is being modified by Outshining the Panama canal......incredible construction feat is The hoover dam. Only in option choice A the modifying clause is followed by the correct noun entity. so A is the correct choice.
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B, D, E is out since the first sentence need to modify the Hoover Dam.
C is wrong in meaning.
So A is my answer
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It is modifier, S+V construction. Only A has the correct modifier + S combo. Or in other words, only "Hoover Dam" is "Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat".

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IMO E

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish (took 21000 more than 2 years, makes it sounds illogical)

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it. ( same as A, comparison is drawn between workers are years)

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers( Same as A and B)

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers (tense error)

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers(seems best Choice)

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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

Analysis : Verb-ing modifier " Outshining...." should be placed next to the noun it is modifying .
A is correct

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish - Correct

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish- CORRECT

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it
>> Outshining incredible construction feat wrongly modifying river
- we want to highlight about dams constructions
- comparison of man built constructions sites – canal, state building and dam

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
>> that would is wrong. The dam is already built

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
>>>> Outshining incredible construction feat wrongy modifying workers

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
>> workers didn’t build the river- wrong modifying
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''Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat'' now after comma what outshines Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building should come. Option A only says the Hoover Dam..so this is correct.
Option B is not correct..it says the Colorado River. Colorado river was not built but Hoover dame was.

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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish
Correct. Hover Dam is the subject of the sentence and Modifier 'Outshining--- feat' should come closest to Hoover Dam

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it
Misplaced Modifier

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
'It' doesn't have any antecedant

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
Misplaced Modifier - will Hoover Dam tame the Colorado river for more than 2 years ??

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
Misplaced Modifier
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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

A- the sentence says as if the Colorado river is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish, therefore wrong.

B- It says as if Colorado river outshines the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building, therefore wrong.

C-the use of would tame shows the uncertainty of the event. The actual sentence doesn't displays uncertainty thus wrong usage of would. Incorrect.

D- same error as option C. Incorrect.

E- Correct. Correct sentence structure.

E is the right answer.

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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

The modifier Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat needs some noun just after it. We see no such noun in C,D, and E. So C,D, and E are out

A conveys the meaning much more directly. Also in B, the it at the end is for Hoover dam, which makes it redundant.

the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it(Hoover Dam)

So Answer is A


(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
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Key thing to notice-

1. The initial modifier "Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat" should modify "the Hoover Dam". Any choice using anything other than "the Hoover Dam" would lead to incorrect modification.

Let’s take a look at each option and eliminate any problematic options:

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish
Correct. Proper Modification and free of any other errors.

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it
Incorrect. Logically, only Hoover Dam can be an incredible construction feat. It is illogical to say that "the Colorado River" was an incredible construction feat because a river cannot be constructed.

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
Incorrect. Modification error. We need the initial modifier to modify "the Hoover Dam".

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
Incorrect. Modification error. We need the initial modifier to modify "the Hoover Dam".

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers
Incorrect. Modification error. We need the initial modifier to modify "the Hoover Dam".
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B,C,D,E: Wrong modified entity of the first non-underlined portion of the sentence.
A: Hoover Dam is the amazing construction feat as mentioned in the first part of the sentence. Therefore, this is correct as is.

A is correct.
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My answer is (A). It took me 40 seconds.

The modifier "Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat" dictates that the subject of main clause should be "the Hoover Dam", rather than " the Colorado River", "it", "21,000 workers", or "more than two years".

When (B) through (E) are ruled out, only (A) remains as the best answer.
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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

Sentence Analysis:
"Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat" is a modifier starting with present participle acting as a gerund. This modifier is supposed to modify "the Hoover Dam ".

Only option A modifies the right entity and the remaining options fail to do so.

Therefore, Correct Option: A
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Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

A is correct as is.

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it.........outshining is wrongly modifying The col river. Also col river cannot be constructed.

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers.....Again it is being modified where as it should refer to Hoover Dam.

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers.......outshining is modifying 21000 workers is wrong.

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers........modifying as well as verb error
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(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish - Looks decent. No modifier errors. Outshining the Panama canal ... modifies Hoover dam.

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it - Modifier error. Colorado river is not outshining the Panama canal in construction.

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Modifier error

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Modifier error

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Modifier error
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IMO A

Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat, the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish.

Modifier - Outshining the Panama Canal or even the Empire State Building as an incredible construction feat -
Modified Entity - The Hoover Dam/ The Colarado River

(A) the Hoover Dam built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, is more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish - Correct -

(B) the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers, was tamed by the Hoover Dam that was built to be more than 726 feet tall and took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish it - - Incorrect - It at the end is unnecessary + As per intended meaning, Dam took two year to finish not River.

(C) it took 21,000 workers more than two years to finish the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Incorrect - Modifier Error

(D) for more than two years, 21,000 workers built the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that would tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Incorrect - Modifier Error

(E) more than two years were needed to complete the 726-foot-tall Hoover Dam that 21,000 workers built to tame the Colorado River, one of America’s most powerful rivers - Incorrect - Modifier Error
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