GMATNinja
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Hello GMATNinja,
One query regarding the usage: Is below one correct?
From the helicopter, I saw a 6-mile long traffic jam due to the overturned truck.
This doesn't quite look right to me. Structurally, the sentence seems to be trying to say that "I saw" the traffic jam "due to the overturned truck" -- so "due to the overturned truck" seems to modify the
verb phrase "I saw." And that's both grammatically wrong ("due to ____" can only modify a noun, not a verb phrase) and nonsensical.
I guess you could argue that "due to the overturned truck" is trying to modify the traffic jam, but it's hard to imagine why you'd construct the sentence that way. Why not make that modifier much more explicit? "From the helicopter, I saw a 6-mile long traffic jam that was caused by the overturned truck." That way, there's zero doubt that the phrase about the overturned truck is modifying the traffic jam.
This would be OK, though: "The horrific, 6-mile long traffic jam was due to the overturned truck."
I hope this helps!
Hi
GMATNinja,
You make me totally confused in the
highlighted part . As far I know, "verb phrase" is something, which acts as "verb" all the times. So, do you think that "I saw" acts as verb?
As far I know, "verb phrase" contains "the verb or any direct or indirect objects
but not the subject anymore". So, why we include the subject "I" with verb "was" considering "verb phrase"?
As far I know the quoted example is from
"Thursdays with Ron's study hall September 23, 2010"Here is the quoted example again:
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From the helicopter, I saw a 6-mile long traffic jam due to the overturned truck
RonPurewal says: "due to" should be replaced with "caused by". So, what's the wrong with in the following sentence if I replaced the "due to" with "caused by"? Doesn't "the overturned truck" directly modifies "traffic jam"?
From the helicopter, I saw a 6-mile long traffic jam caused by the overturned truck.https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTQlKd ... /playlistsHere is the attachment of Ron's study hall below:
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